The wick

Deep ponderings and thoughts profound I loved this one ... its really goooood ;) love and hugz Jayne x x We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall ...

Yay, loved this - can't add much - good write, the only TINY thing I have to offer... wonder how it would read if you took the "a" out? A flame slowly smothered by patient gallows works better for me, but it's hardly that different. I feel this little write is packed full of meaning & sentiment, that makes it delicious to me... so few words, so much to read in it ... yum! from Cheers Anni~ "A word is not the same with one writer as with another. One tears it from his guts. The other pulls it out of his overcoat pocket". ~Charles Peguy

Loved the deepness of this, maybe small but says a lot. I enjoyed. Lyz.

Dear Espen... your alter ego...doorman suits you. I am a fan. To be able to say much in a few short sentences is an art within an art. ~A

Nice title Espen! Liked where the theme went... right up to the closing line! "My morrows’ murk agog, Kindly douse this candles’ dwindling fervor" (singular?) Your writing is par excellence! Bonita j