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Aug 31, 2009
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The Fury of Twilight
The triple-galactic, caustic gleam
of the time shards, twilight may bring
can either cause a man's soul to cry,
or can cause a man's soul to sing.
Women may muster up might in the night
as their feet find good purchase in earth,
they may misunderstand by fate's own hand
leading them to deny their own birth !
Children may fade, if they get too afraid
where the wind washes over weak wills,
an invisible gust will evaporate trust
and replace it with make-believe thrills.
The breeze finally will cease, and learn to desist
as the wind welcomes whatever waits,
in the wings, to the sides...where twilight time hides,
we keep track of what springs from hell's gates !
For, as soon as the breeze can rattle the trees
and leave minds all vacant of thought,
be it night, be it day...twilight will have it's way
and can cause you to lose all you've got !
.
of the time shards, twilight may bring
can either cause a man's soul to cry,
or can cause a man's soul to sing.
Women may muster up might in the night
as their feet find good purchase in earth,
they may misunderstand by fate's own hand
leading them to deny their own birth !
Children may fade, if they get too afraid
where the wind washes over weak wills,
an invisible gust will evaporate trust
and replace it with make-believe thrills.
The breeze finally will cease, and learn to desist
as the wind welcomes whatever waits,
in the wings, to the sides...where twilight time hides,
we keep track of what springs from hell's gates !
For, as soon as the breeze can rattle the trees
and leave minds all vacant of thought,
be it night, be it day...twilight will have it's way
and can cause you to lose all you've got !
.
— docmaverick, Aug 31, 2009
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lyz
16 years 9 months ago
Dear Docmaverick
docmaverick
16 years 9 months ago
You read it....
Seren
16 years 9 months ago
Dear Doc
docmaverick
16 years 9 months ago
What can I say....