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Aug 31, 2009
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Danse Macabre (Inspired by Bonitaj's poem Dance Of The Macabre)
Danse Macabre
Without you I would
cease to exist.
Long have I pursued
your movements of sheer
perfection and splendor.
Like a kite soaring
and dipping in
the air currents,
you take me flying
on a heady ride
of child-like abandon
which I remember
before my corruptive
descent into depravity.
If I could, I would
engage you in the
Danse Macabre,
But you are too
cunning in your
innocence to be
lured to your death.
A shame to be sure,
for at last we could
hold each other in
the glow of our
ultimate exhalation.
What grand diversion;
to waltz to our deaths.
this is what my dictionary has to say about "Danse Macabre."
horribly gruesome: including gruesome and horrific details of death and decay
[15th century. From French (danse) macabre, a dance in which Death lured people to dance until they dropped dead. Of uncertain origin: probably an alteration of danse Macabé, a translation of medieval Latin chorea Machabaeorum, “dance of the Maccabees,” originally probably a representation of the slaughter of the Maccabees in a medieval mystery play.]
Encarta® World English Dictionary © & (P) 1999,2000 Microsoft Corporation. All rights reserved. Developed for Microsoft by Bloomsbury Publishing Plc.
Without you I would
cease to exist.
Long have I pursued
your movements of sheer
perfection and splendor.
Like a kite soaring
and dipping in
the air currents,
you take me flying
on a heady ride
of child-like abandon
which I remember
before my corruptive
descent into depravity.
If I could, I would
engage you in the
Danse Macabre,
But you are too
cunning in your
innocence to be
lured to your death.
A shame to be sure,
for at last we could
hold each other in
the glow of our
ultimate exhalation.
What grand diversion;
to waltz to our deaths.
this is what my dictionary has to say about "Danse Macabre."
horribly gruesome: including gruesome and horrific details of death and decay
[15th century. From French (danse) macabre, a dance in which Death lured people to dance until they dropped dead. Of uncertain origin: probably an alteration of danse Macabé, a translation of medieval Latin chorea Machabaeorum, “dance of the Maccabees,” originally probably a representation of the slaughter of the Maccabees in a medieval mystery play.]
Encarta® World English Dictionary © & (P) 1999,2000 Microsoft Corporation. All rights reserved. Developed for Microsoft by Bloomsbury Publishing Plc.
— Candlewitch, Aug 31, 2009
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hugo la rosa
16 years 10 months ago
Great poem Cat
Candlewitch
16 years 10 months ago
hello Hugo
lyz
16 years 10 months ago
Wow.
Candlewitch
16 years 10 months ago
hello Lyz
Bonitaj
16 years 10 months ago
This is outstanding Caitlin!
Candlewitch
16 years 10 months ago
:)
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
Dearest Cat
Candlewitch
16 years 10 months ago
Dearest Jayne
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
Deat Cat
Candlewitch
16 years 10 months ago
Dearest Jayne
ziggy
16 years 10 months ago
how did i miss this
Candlewitch
16 years 10 months ago
hi Edd
Janice Pearce
16 years 10 months ago
Danse Macabre
Candlewitch
16 years 10 months ago
:)
Quillsvein1
16 years 10 months ago
Great poem
Candlewitch
16 years 10 months ago
hello
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