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memories of , the curse of Abbots Forge
Memories of the curse at Abbots Forge
Came the wind one day
that took my hand,
Pushing me along the sand
And me a lad 12 years no more,
Heading down
to Abbots Forge
The workings gone,
the roof caved in,
the sides were clad with rusting tin,
from another age it was rather sad,
but me a young and sturdy lad,
I’d chance to brave the dark within
the curse of Abbots Forge
Thay say he killed his wife a new
Old Abbot with his mock led crew,
Accused her of betrayal due,
A curse posed by his kin,
He chucked her in the molten steel
Dis-guarding her denial pleas,
They said her red hairs still to see
On the floor
at Abbots Forge
I took a breath
forbad the dread,
and slipped the tin and followed my head ,
a dark and gloomy acid place
the wind was whispering its distaste,
the sunlight broke between the slats
lit up the dust of scrambling rats,
the monsters watched my shaking frame,
as I stood and waited
the cursed claim,
But just the wind came answering back,
She’s gone it said, she wont be back,
I left the dark to see the sun
The ruin of Abbots Forge ,
I often think
now I am grown,
when venturing close to Abbots Forge
I broke the curse,
removed the bad
it made a man from a skittish lad
down at Abbots forge
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