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Aug 30, 2009
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I Miss You
I Miss You
Not trying to lead with feelings
But, baby I feel I need your will and
Your comfort, see my heart hungers
For the greatest affection because I made it a section
In my new life, you do know I mean you right
Wait, hold on I ain’t trying to add pressure
It’s just hard to face how so strong you bring pleasure
To someone that was told couldn’t measure
Up to being care for nor cared about
I meet you, now life’s not fair without
You for the first time I can say I made proud move
So that’s why I was endowed to
Lift you and tell you in a special way that I miss you……
— jzarmel, Aug 30, 2009
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Kenneth Sharp
16 years 9 months ago
This is a nice piece. I
jzarmel
16 years 9 months ago
I appreciate your time and