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I Miss You

I Miss You

 

Not trying to lead with feelings

But, baby I feel I need your will and

Your comfort, see my heart hungers

For the greatest affection because I made it a section

 

In my new life, you do know I mean you right

Wait, hold on I ain’t trying to add pressure

It’s just hard to face how so strong you bring pleasure

To someone that was told couldn’t measure

 

Up to being care for nor cared about

I meet you, now life’s not fair without

You for the first time I can say I made proud move

So that’s why I was endowed to

 

Lift you and tell you in a special way that I miss you……

— jzarmel, Aug 30, 2009

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Kenneth Sharp

16 years 9 months ago

This is a nice piece. I

This is a nice piece. I liked the balance pacing of it, and the strong ending.