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CREATION

            From the flow of energy 
            comes the emergence
                           of life 
               Elements that blend
                some how ascend
                     Through time 

             Single cells split life 
             life has now sparked
             Through a millennium
                      of mutation
              
                We now call creation .

— ziggy, Aug 30, 2009

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 9 months ago

edd

self explanatory, this poem. Nice flow with great language usage. I enjoyed. Always, Cat
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ziggy

16 years 9 months ago

creation

enda, patrick collins. hi there , i got inspired watching the discovery channel , lol thanks so much happy you like it always ziggyyyyy
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ziggy

16 years 9 months ago

creation

enda, patrick collins. many thanks for the read and stars
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Terrabova

16 years 9 months ago

Creation's creator!

I enjoyed this poem Ziggy! Seems you bridged the gap from raw science to raw faith.
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ziggy

16 years 9 months ago

hello

enda, patrick collins. hi i always had an interest in science great comment thank you
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lyz

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Ziggy

From that first flow of energy, you my friend, have created. And it ain't no mutant. Lol. Lyz. x
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ziggy

16 years 9 months ago

creation

enda, patrick collins. hello again wow more stars from you , lol nice comment wrote this watching the discovery channel cheers my friend , x