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there is a sacred world, speechless

the Russians knew how to tell a story
in two words or less
from brother to brother
fish in Japan are hunted
to perfection
in Koi ponds
for their iridescence alone,
rainbows under peaceful waters

dolphins leave a taste of laughter
lingering,
for their
blood is warm, and warmth
leaves a trail to follow
a scent that reminds us
how the heart, wilding
yearns to be brushed
away like black sand
from tired eyes

there is no dissolution
complete,
bruised
grey skies over the flatland,
mountains that
walk in the emptiness
when words die
and we struggle to survive,
shadows
against the light.


— Kailashana, Aug 30, 2009

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lyz

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Kailashana

Beautiful, the calmness and serenity in these words, yet, twisted into a struggle of survival.I love fish, do not like eating them, but because of the lifestyle in aussie land, a beer and rod in hand, is a pastime here.Your words have a lot of different meanings to me, Quizzical, If I may, but loved it for what I have read between the lines, a touch of sadness but while you write like this, words, my friend, will never die. Lyz.
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 9 months ago

You never cease to surprise us with your thoughts.

"Mountains that walk in the emptiness", oh what weight of meaning stamps out the shape of the worlds strata with this stride of powerful creative, destructive, all sided poem about so much, all in the nutshell of your thought, Anna You never cease to surprise us with your thoughts. Love Ann
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 9 months ago

Thank you for bringing me

Thank you for bringing me back to these pages you are visiting my dear Sister from Norway. Much love to you. Hope you're having a good day, my friend. Yes. My thoughts circumnavigate, meander and obliterate. Love, Anna
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 9 months ago

You keep meandering and filandering about in the poetry

You keep meandering and filandering about in the poetry of your dreams, you do it so well dear sister of words in O hio. Thankyou for thanking me!! You have a good day too but now its the next perhaps? How muddling with you going to bed as we get up here. Love Ann