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Inner growth

   What do I do with love now?The seed that had been planted a summer agoNurtured and fed words of passion and trustDelicate tendrilsUnfolding towards the light.Such hope, such energyWas always overshadowed bySuburban hedges nurturing smaller livesGive me the open space to grow!Rooting deep,Deep within the dark brown tomb of earth.Resting , dormant, dead from the outside.Living within awaiting to blossom
— seabhac, Aug 30, 2009

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Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Liz , This is Just

Dear Liz , This is Just wonderful and I think its my favourite of yours now bravo ... Love and hugz Jayne x x.. "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 9 months ago

thanks Jayne

Getting a little braver Jayne, I appreciate the support and the bright torch of your path. Liz