INARTICULATE WHISPERS OF THE HEART

not ready yet!

— Bonitaj, Aug 30, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: Tip of Southern Africa, ZAF

Favorite Poets: Too many to narrow down, but briefly :, AUDEN, T.S. ELIOT, DICKENSON, RILKE, THOREAU, RUMI ... the list is endless. Am inspired by many, especially those that live lives of "quiet desperation, and go to the grave with a song still in them" (THoreau)

Critiques

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

There is a poignant sadness

There is a poignant sadness in this one Boni ... But I loved it :) love and hugz Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall "...

Bonitaj

16 years 10 months ago

Thanks Jayne!

You somehow see beyond the words every time! Boni

Candlewitch

16 years 10 months ago

hello Boni

I was at the workshop but I didn't see your poem there. I guess I'll go back and try again. Always, Cat

Bonitaj

16 years 10 months ago

Hi Cat!

I meant my private workshop lol Not too happy with my work at the moment and really busy with other stuff so I'm only going to post when I'm "Up and running" again! Thanks for stopping by! Cheers Boni

Candlewitch

16 years 10 months ago

Ohhhh...

That explains why I couldn't find it! But I did find "the five senses" (I think that was the title) which I enjoyed very much and commented on. I know about not being happy with one's work (and making many revisions) but I've always found most of your work to be exceptional. Always, Cat

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