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Aug 29, 2009
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There's Hope In Consequence
There's an archer over hill
perched silently beyond his bow
below, the proposed assassination of the king
and what an honour they've bestowed
"he who killed the tyrant"
word will spread throughout the land
words of the kings demise
at the hands of an unnamed man
An honourable soul
with a fist full of righteous intent
with the skill and the bravery
to end the pestilence and torment
poised upon baited breath
as the king departs his stone covers
the archer draws back his bow
seeing seething dark colours
awaiting that ideal shot
he knows timing is everything
he follows the king in his sights
his fingers steady upon the heavy string
the king finally turns to bare his face
it's leathery and quite disgraceful
his vesture of purple and gold
ludicrous and quite distasteful
the archer fires
confident as fate descended
the arrow whistles in a whisper
and kisses its intended
As the kings blood spills
the archer knows it's ended
he fades into the dense forest
back to the arms of those he defended.
perched silently beyond his bow
below, the proposed assassination of the king
and what an honour they've bestowed
"he who killed the tyrant"
word will spread throughout the land
words of the kings demise
at the hands of an unnamed man
An honourable soul
with a fist full of righteous intent
with the skill and the bravery
to end the pestilence and torment
poised upon baited breath
as the king departs his stone covers
the archer draws back his bow
seeing seething dark colours
awaiting that ideal shot
he knows timing is everything
he follows the king in his sights
his fingers steady upon the heavy string
the king finally turns to bare his face
it's leathery and quite disgraceful
his vesture of purple and gold
ludicrous and quite distasteful
the archer fires
confident as fate descended
the arrow whistles in a whisper
and kisses its intended
As the kings blood spills
the archer knows it's ended
he fades into the dense forest
back to the arms of those he defended.
— Bosscombat, Aug 29, 2009
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lyz
16 years 9 months ago
Dear Bosscombat
Bosscombat
16 years 9 months ago
:)
Seren
16 years 9 months ago
Dearest Matty
Bosscombat
16 years 9 months ago
:)
Seren
16 years 9 months ago
Didn’t you mean a little
Geezer
16 years 9 months ago
Nice shot!
Bosscombat
16 years 9 months ago
:)
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 9 months ago
Bloody terrific!
Bosscombat
16 years 9 months ago
:)
Janice Pearce
16 years 9 months ago
There's Hope
Bosscombat
16 years 9 months ago
:)
Kailashana
16 years 9 months ago
Ha! The man who would be
Bosscombat
16 years 9 months ago
:)
docmaverick
16 years 9 months ago
I liked your energy in this one. Ironic, isn't it ?
Bosscombat
16 years 9 months ago
:)
orgami
16 years 9 months ago
Roncalles
Bosscombat
16 years 9 months ago
:)