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ziggy
Aug 29, 2009 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

stuffed pride

 Dart in the heart this 
severed head hangs 
dead those glass eyes
replace the sight of 
horror, depicted as art

Without compassion 
sends a shivering tear 
in fear to the floor

Stuffed with a cruel 
sense of pride this 
creature has died .






— ziggy, Aug 29, 2009

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ziggy

16 years 11 months ago

stuffed pride

enda, patrick collins. hi thanks for reading , a pet hate of mine is to walk in some where and see an animals head mounted on the wall
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 10 months ago

wow

I feel much for the poor creature who died, but the poem is a good one, full of feeling and dark design. I like it. Always, Cat
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ziggy

16 years 10 months ago

stuffed pride

enda, patrick collins. hello again ,this is a very old write back when i started so i said i would just put it out there never posted it anywhere i am delighed you like and cheers for the hi 5 ,
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lyz

16 years 10 months ago

Dear Ziggy

Thought I commented on this one, or it has disappeared. Oh well. I have to say, I do not get any one who has cruelty to any animals on their agenda, and no, it is not art. Great write. Well done. Lyz.
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ziggy

16 years 10 months ago

hi lyz

enda, patrick collins. thanks for the read nice one

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