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When a Journey Befalls You

'Twas a small request
so I tried my best
to lead this venture into the night;
let the evening bring
a place to sing
Johnny Fingers seemed a bit, alright.

The luck we had
could've made us mad
but, amiable were we;
what was in store
we hadn't bargained for
'twas not our night to Karaoke!

Well, Johnny's didn't rock
and her truck-door's lock
swallowed the key up to the grip;
locked out of the truck
we embraced our luck
and embarked on our private trip.

What we found
after walking through town
was, this journey made us smile;
drawing ever close
much more than most
we enjoyed sharing each mile.

What a lucky guy!
How blessed am I?
To have Laura as my guide;
we began the pace
towards my place
our smiles growing ever wide.

Can't say for sure
what you'll endure
when a journey befalls you;
one thing I know
wherever I should go
I'm taking "Smiley Eyes" along, too!

The night grew old
and truth be told
finally, in my living room;
our trip did cease
and we found peace
ignoring any shade of gloom.

The night was getting late
as we did conversate
we both were getting in the know;
we had time to share
as we both sat there
and watched each other.....grow.
— docmaverick, Aug 29, 2009

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About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Critiques

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Antoinette Mar…

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Doc:......

Another great Journey, you've taken me on...Rythem, Pattern, Pacing is great, and I love the way this ends....excellent
M

mantiscepter

16 years 9 months ago

JOURNEYS

Wonderful journey very well written. I enjoyed this poem. Great use of words nice flow. Good to have you out here. Mantiscepter
L

lyz

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Docmaverick

I enjoyed reading about this journey. Love story in its glory. From the heart, colorful sentiment.I loved how you wrote, "I'm taking Smiley Eye's along too." From Lyz.
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 9 months ago

Aahwww heck ! Lyz....

...I mean, shucks, ma'am. Thank you for the nice remark. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.