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Aug 28, 2009
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The Bag Lady
The Bag Lady - blue That’s me ……………….I carry my world around withme - you are there every second of every day I am tattered and torn a little bit
frayed around the edges as is
my heart that is shattered
and broken blue Photo’s and poems of love areall that I own. - you who stole
my heart my very blue soul It never ever forgot or Forgets -
you're the one who owns my
sad blue soul This is where I am now -
in limbo blue betweentwo worlds You're there - I am here foryou - always the onlyplace I long to be your own Electric Blue
frayed around the edges as is
my heart that is shattered
and broken blue Photo’s and poems of love areall that I own. - you who stole
my heart my very blue soul It never ever forgot or Forgets -
you're the one who owns my
sad blue soul This is where I am now -
in limbo blue betweentwo worlds You're there - I am here foryou - always the onlyplace I long to be your own Electric Blue
— Electric Blue, Aug 28, 2009
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Rett
16 years 11 months ago
Maggie, so sad
Electric Blue
16 years 11 months ago
The Bag Lady
Rett
16 years 11 months ago
So sorry Maggie
Seren
16 years 11 months ago
Dearest Maggie
Electric Blue
16 years 11 months ago
The Bag Lady
Seren
16 years 11 months ago
Dearest Maggie
Nordic cloud
16 years 11 months ago
Oh dear Maggie, turn on the colours of the sunlight
Candlewitch
16 years 10 months ago
Dear Maggie
Electric Blue
16 years 10 months ago
Bag Lady
Pamela A. Lamppa
16 years 5 months ago
How beautifully sad
Electric Blue
16 years 4 months ago
Bag Lady
magics02
16 years 4 months ago
Oh my electric blue
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