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Aug 28, 2009
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The Bag Lady
The Bag Lady - blue That’s me ……………….I carry my world around withme - you are there every second of every day I am tattered and torn a little bit
frayed around the edges as is
my heart that is shattered
and broken blue Photo’s and poems of love areall that I own. - you who stole
my heart my very blue soul It never ever forgot or Forgets -
you're the one who owns my
sad blue soul This is where I am now -
in limbo blue betweentwo worlds You're there - I am here foryou - always the onlyplace I long to be your own Electric Blue
frayed around the edges as is
my heart that is shattered
and broken blue Photo’s and poems of love areall that I own. - you who stole
my heart my very blue soul It never ever forgot or Forgets -
you're the one who owns my
sad blue soul This is where I am now -
in limbo blue betweentwo worlds You're there - I am here foryou - always the onlyplace I long to be your own Electric Blue
— Electric Blue, Aug 28, 2009
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Rett
16 years 9 months ago
Maggie, so sad
Electric Blue
16 years 9 months ago
The Bag Lady
Rett
16 years 9 months ago
So sorry Maggie
Seren
16 years 9 months ago
Dearest Maggie
Electric Blue
16 years 9 months ago
The Bag Lady
Seren
16 years 9 months ago
Dearest Maggie
Nordic cloud
16 years 9 months ago
Oh dear Maggie, turn on the colours of the sunlight
Candlewitch
16 years 9 months ago
Dear Maggie
Electric Blue
16 years 9 months ago
Bag Lady
Pamela A. Lamppa
16 years 4 months ago
How beautifully sad
Electric Blue
16 years 3 months ago
Bag Lady
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Oh my electric blue