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whose zoomin' who

just me and my bike on the open road

zoomin right on through

to a place where I’ve never  been to

the rush of the wind upon my face

edges me closer to the freedom I seek

my excitement of almost reaching

somewhere I can be me and really share

the daredevil open roads of sacred experience

when someone draws up alongside me

and smiles right on into my freedom loving soul

I now know whose zoomin who…….


(C)2009 Lenny Gazbowski


— Lenny of Cohen, Aug 28, 2009

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Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

16 years 9 months ago

whose zoomin' who

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