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Aug 28, 2009
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thought 24, drunk again... of course
drunk again i stumble with words, actions alikei wish, and i dream so much more then i have
i question my intuition and break the walls of wrong and right
i am not as i seem but more,
hold me where i am, i break where i stand
i take another swig.....
its in my blood, i welcome it these days
depression setsin i question why
justice is not swift i slimb in bed, god i wish
echoes welcome steangth i do not have anything
lie to me, tell me you love me
i know you dont mean a thing you say
i know you never really did
i was just a transition statement from what is to what will be\
go ahead, treat me like shit again, thats all i expect
i question my intuition and break the walls of wrong and right
i am not as i seem but more,
hold me where i am, i break where i stand
i take another swig.....
its in my blood, i welcome it these days
depression setsin i question why
justice is not swift i slimb in bed, god i wish
echoes welcome steangth i do not have anything
lie to me, tell me you love me
i know you dont mean a thing you say
i know you never really did
i was just a transition statement from what is to what will be\
go ahead, treat me like shit again, thats all i expect
— washing tears, Aug 28, 2009
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Fleur MacDonald
16 years 9 months ago
Tell it like it is