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ziggy
Aug 27, 2009 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

OPEN BOOK

           Thought  brought to a place
           where it is witnessed by the 
                      here and now,

           Open to endless possibility's 
            
           Which is disciplined only by 
           the limitations set out by our 
           self's and others around us. 
        
               Like thought echoed by  
           predeceasing generations 
              for us in fact and rhyme       
              written and bound sealed
                            in time.


— ziggy, Aug 27, 2009

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 11 months ago

hello

Edd, I really like this gentle, but deeply thoughtful piece. The title is great and so is the language usage. These are my favorite lines: Like thought echoed by predeceasing generations for us in fact and rhyme written and bound sealed in time Always, Cat
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ziggy

16 years 11 months ago

open book

enda, patrick collins. hi there what can i say thanks so much yet again i wrote this a long time ago
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lyz

16 years 10 months ago

Dear Ziggy

Your words are so touching, and yes we are an open book for some. And I feel this is from the heart and well thought out. And sealed in time will be poems like this. I enjoyed this. Thank u for sharing. Love Lyz. XX
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ziggy

16 years 10 months ago

open book

enda, patrick collins. ah wat a lovely comment to get this was wrote back in the day cheers thanks chat soon, x

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