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Warning! All Scenes.....Very Graphic and Sexual Content

First school dance of the year.

Princess Paula...leaning on the rail,

She spies her objects of disdain.

She has to have an entourage though...
 

Her long golden locks brushed in a halo,

Frame her cute face with pouty full lips.

Grey-blue eyes shine with anticipation,

They will just love her newest scheme.
 

The first blow to her throat,

Silences the help-scream before it escapes.

Grabbing her by the ankles, I pull her down.

The dark backstairs smash her lips, bumpity, bump.
 

Her hair makes a neat way to hold her up.

While I filet those beautiful thighs, gurgling breaths plead.

That cute button-nose all mashed to one side,

The red drips flowing to join her painted lips.
 

Wiggling seductively, as I light her so very HOT blouse,

Lips form a bloody 'O' as the flaming alcohol chars her breast.

I pluck a crispy nipple to chew, as I watch the last twitches.

The other one is too well done for my taste.
 

Perfect, flawless skin, the mirror doesn't lie...he says to himself.

Dark brooding eyes, fail to see my reflected self,

As I creep behind the creep. The broken glass in his face,

Crunches with that squealing sound, and he pushes back.
 

The ribbons of blood so bright against his tan.

One eye has sparkles still...or maybe silvered glass.

Black hair all spiked....yes....spiked!

The hammer makes a thocking sound as I pound them down.
 

She puffs furiously the ciggie, she has so little time.

Her black nails mirror her taste in lipstick.

The cloud of acid drawn in with the next deep drag,

Makes eyes tear and etches the lining of her throat.
 

Pliers gripping rings in body art, I pull them slowly.

Blood welling forth like a tiny oil-wells around the rips.

She seems excited, the nipple rings stand out! 

Tan cones split, they reveal rouge flesh.
 

Chrome studs turned in to neck, leave thick welts,

When I clamp my fingers around her collar.

Fitting she should wear a collar, her bitchiness well known. 

Screw the homework! Stuffed where she was alone.
 

Who will chaperone the 'Chaperone' ?

His just "a touch of grey" Doesn't impart wisdom.

Fingers that stroked young freckled chests,

Twisted to suit his crime. I shake his hand.
 

Grasping private portions of flesh, squeezing out empathy,

I elicit no sound from his tongue, which I left on the floor.

The packing tape from recent ejection at his last job,

Keep his screams inside. No tenure here!
 

Funny... it seems so small, flaccid even.

I don't know what they saw in it.

Bloody chunk of meat, I hold it before his eyes.

But the light dies before he recognises it, too bad...
 

A changed man, I straighten my costume of invisibilty.

Smiling, the walk to the door is forever.

Passing the cliques, I am not seen.

But they will hear of me now!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

— Geezer, Aug 27, 2009

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Region, Country: New York State - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Poe, Emily Dickenson, Robert Frost, Shakespeare, and many of the poets here at Neopoet.

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Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

WOW I cannot say You

WOW I cannot say You didn't warn me but can I open my eyes now ??? LOL love and hugz Jayne ... love you big smile "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 9 months ago

Yeah, it's all over...

Maybe if I had let them scream a little, you would have thought twice to read. But I had to keep them quiet so as not to give myself away. I looked for your rant. Hasn't shown up yet. I will keep looking for it though, it will be interesting to see how mad you can get. I know that there would be missing fingers and such, if it were I. I have been fortunate enough that My wallet hasn't come up missing, but we have lost some very valuable items over the years from so called friends and family. [My wife's jewelry, coin collection, money etc.] I only wear sterling, so I haven't lost much, but also have had a quarter carat diamond earring, and some almost pure silver necklaces gone. All told, thousands of dollars. It almost feels like you have been raped, you feel so violated. When you have a suspect, I would like to have 'Killer' interrogate them. We will have answers! So sorry that you have had to deal with this loss of faith in your fellow humanity, along with everything else that is going on. L & BIG Hugz, Gee
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Gee

It wasnt the wallet as much as the contents Gee it held my last ever photo of my mother and it cannot be replaced now :( there was a few other trickets worth nothing to anyone else but they meant so much in memories :(:( I am very sad ... but I had my rant I feel a little better I am going to post it in the next half hour just polishing it off lol love and hugz Jayne x x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 9 months ago

Gee

You are fast becoming the king of horror here on neo. Thanks for the warning, but I just had to read along. Great serial killer contribution to the site! The prom night from hell. Always, Cat
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bjp

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Geezer,

This is truly scary and the images are hugely evocative. But it doesn't work as a poem. You certainly have this genre nailed (which I expect some victim will next endure). I encourage you to try this sort of thing as a short story, you might find more freedom outside of poem formate. Then again, this is a gutsy gutsy write. It reveals the brain's machinations, which is always the scariest part both for writer and the reader. I think you have made a superb choice to write on this topic (even though I visualize so much so that I avoid horror most of the time). It might be that the nervousness of the write has affected the content. That too should quiet a bit with more exposure and also the more wide ranging format of the short story. I am giving five stars for overcoming your own fear to write something that scares the shit out of you, friends and strangers alike. Brian
DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 9 months ago

Wow.. Ok I am awake now Gee.

Wow.. Ok I am awake now Gee. Your delve in to the relm of horror was well acheived. It deserves it's content adisory, but very well written, almost to descriptive. Realistic and horrific. Good read Gee. D.D.
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 9 months ago

D. D. How the hell are you?

So glad that you are here! I was hoping that I would somehow be in touch with you, and you would see what I have been doing. So you like it? I think I may have to change my form to short story for these 'Killer' series. But if that is what it takes....Have you read the others? Talk to me after you catch up, Gee.