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Nov 11, 2011
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PALE REFLECTIONS
PALE REFLECTIONS
I am a pale reflection of yesterday
a shadow wandering through the days
painful to itself and the soul it bears.
the child I was to those who bore me.
lingers somewhere in patient anticipation
not knowing what is to come
yet certain of its coming...
and wishiing it were not so
— Geremia, Nov 11, 2011
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Last Few Words: I am still around barely fnctional ohysically, Have taken many unexpected hits to body lately. just out of hospital again, I thank God I still have a clear mind. Wish u all well and the spirit to fight back until YOU decide enough is enough. No one wants to suffer.Sometimes, I think worse than the pain is the loss of human dignity. joe
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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lou
14 years 6 months ago
Joe
sad and beautiful all at once.
Lou
Geremia
14 years 6 months ago
Love to my Lou. Thank you
Love to my Lou. Thank you
joe