Eye of the storm

                    Between love and deception
                      hides the eye of the storm
                         peace and tranquility
                            hides from us all
                                    you say ,

                               "I am torn apart"

                     But no one is bleeding so it
                       is hard to believe what i am
                        seeing , in life we all fall
                               before we rise
                                swoop before
                                     we soar

                   Taking the rough with the smooth
                            waiting for the interlude .

— ziggy, Aug 26, 2009

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Critiques

Candlewitch

16 years 9 months ago

hello

Eye Of The Storm, seems to be the perfect title for this piece. Your language usage is good and conveys your ideas well. The pacing is very good and flows well. I like both the beginning and end, however the end is my favorite 2 lines. Always, Cat

ziggy

16 years 9 months ago

EYE OF THE STORM

enda, patrick collins. HI there cat this was one of the last poems i wrote last year so its more recent than the others and those comments coming from you are well taken yet again thanks for the rating , so glad you like it yours ziggyyyy

lyz

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Ziggy

You have put in my mind the thought of other wee quotes people say, I know your poem reads about ups and downs in life, but I love, I am torn apart, but no one is bleeding. I enjoyed this, this morning. With smile on my face and thoughts running through my head. Lol. Love Lyz XX

ziggy

16 years 9 months ago

hi lyz

enda, patrick collins.you just picked out my own favourite line it would be nice to think i was the first to think of it tis hard to know these days nice comments chat soon , always ziggy,or edd, or patrick take your pickkkkkkk ,,,,,,,,,,lol