The gift

A gift was givenFreely.Without conditionsWithout judgements.Not gold , silver or myrrhIt is pricelessIt cannot be boughtIt is too preciousI have given a giftThe acceptance of itCompletes the circleLove is the giftThe giving and acceptanceLife’s delight.

— seabhac, Aug 26, 2009

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Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Liz

This was a delight to read, it had a beautiful flow and the message is just wonderful ,your heart shines in this one ... Love and hugz Jayne x x Edit forgot the stars LOL ... We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall ...

Hooded Stranger

16 years 9 months ago

Perfect!

I was going to waffle on about this great piece of work...and then I thought, I don't need to say a word, the poem speaks entirely for itself...this line sums it all up Perfectly: Completes the circle This is my favourite poem on this forum...and I usually head towards the dark ones. Thank you for this, HS ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".