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sweetspirit
Aug 26, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Sweet Kiss

For I am but a simple soulThough often unsure of whom I am
Still this I know deep within
without love I am not whole

my love is true and that I’ll not hide
‘Tis only truth I keep inside
because love’s loss I’ve felt once before
because of that Oh, I will love thee even more

my gift may at first seem small
When I give, I do swear to give my all
For life spent loving not, you see
Is meaningless it seems to me

My gift I offer up to you
Is my love shall ever be true
all I am is yours to keep
tender love to you I’ll make

Please take my hand release all your cares
And trust that our Goddess will lead us there
Love’s promise then simply is this
Forever feel my softest sweet kiss

 

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Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 8 months ago

Sweet Kiss...

The title of your poem, fits the poem perfectly. I feel it's also sweet, lovely and graceful... Raven
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sweetspirit

16 years 8 months ago

Raven

~smiles~ brightly I was feeling sweet lovely and ever so graceful today when this came about. Your words are always welcome here and much appreciated. I wasn't sure on the title..took only a minute or 2 to create the title took the longest so I am glad it fit. Jen
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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Sweetspirit

Aptly named.I enjoyed the words immensely.Actually, I felt it to be very calming to read, I don't Know why, but I did.Your Sweet Spirit soars to enchant us all. Lyz.
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sweetspirit

16 years 8 months ago

Lyz

Happy to see you again today:) Funny that you say you felt very calm I've had many people say that too me that I have a calming soothing affect on others. SweetSpirit...Jen
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear ~Jen~

This is your best to date in my opinion, there is a truth in your words and it shines ... beautiful work ... You have a very appropriate name your a sweet woman whos an asset to this site ... love and hugz Jayne x x We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall ...
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sweetspirit

16 years 8 months ago

Seren

~giggles~ well lady you was tappin on my front door just the other day saying hurry up..so I just did as you requested ;) So glad you enjoyed Jen
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2 Quills

16 years 8 months ago

My Sweet

Well dang, Darlin…you just posted this barely moments ago and it’s already on spot light…u got it going on over here! You know I’m always a sucker for the tender stuff; I love this poem almost as much as I love you and never do you cease to amaze me with your beautifully honest words. They’re almost as good as your beautiful self. Me
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sweetspirit

16 years 8 months ago

My Love~*

awww shucks you gonna make me blush;) Well truth be told you are the inspiration of all my tenderness and you are the one who made me SweetSpirit so the credit goes to you My King for today and tomorrow and all our yesterdays your love carries me through. Sweetly kisses you~~*
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

THE SWEETEST LIGHT THAT

THE SWEETEST LIGHT THAT FALLS IN LOVE IS NOW LIT UP AND STANDS ABOVE lol told you it was your best congratulations on spotlight !!!!!!! omg wooot huni I am so happy for you ... big hug and Love Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

LOL I just noticed your on

LOL I just noticed your on top of hubby ... thats just too cute me and my hubby where in spotlight and evolution the other night ... :D big Smile Love Jayne x x We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall ...
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Sourav

16 years 8 months ago

Very romantic and

Very romantic and passionate. I loved the lines and the emotion behind this write. Wonderful!
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sweetspirit

16 years 8 months ago

Sourav

I am glad to have you visit hope you stop in more often. So happy you enjoyed. Jen
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mantiscepter

16 years 8 months ago

Sweetness

lovely words full of sweet sentiment. a flow of it's own. Nicely done. Mantiscepter
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sweetspirit

16 years 8 months ago

Mantiscepter

I have been reading your works this week and must say I am a fan already so your words are muchly appreciated :) I find that when they happen really quick the flow usually is the same. I am so glad you enjoyed it. Jen
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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Jen.

I love your writing, You are a story teller in your own right. I love the last verse, Beautiful. Well done. Thanks from Lyz.