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Nothingness
The limbs of fall bowed as if to meet her feet
Never noticing before now, just how severe or how sweet
Swaying this way and that as they fiercely whipped
Loosely leaving everything behind to make one last trip
Dedicated glances confronting her shadows never seen
Speed that feels reversed to a day left somewhere in between
No dreams of marriage, a prince with a castle or a fancy carriage
No babies to care for, house to keep up with or husband to adore
Cherishing this moment of absence as a child, now that she has grown
Wielding tidy bundles of mail left undelivered to an address unknown
And yet, the wind propels her like the leaves off the trees
Sending her into the great abyss looking for what is to be
She casts off any endings that others had hoped to see
And lends herself to nothingness as this has set her free
Critiques
Janice Pearce
16 years 9 months ago
Nothingness