Spit On Your Name (Adult content) Offensive Language

Woooooooooooooooooooow Great Rant !!..... just wow Matty brilliant writing .. I am godsmacked ... love you huni hope you feel better now ???? lol Love and hugz Jayne see you on fridayyyyyyyyyyyyy woooooooottttt :D:D four days to go, four days to go wooooooo happy days :) <3 "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...

BOTH OF YOU IN SPOTLIGHT IN ONE NIGHT ... you guys rock LOl love you congrates darlin lmao ;) "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...

I couldn't have said it better, maybe different but.... I don't know who you are mad at, but if you want I will send my killer over to lend you a hand. I just know he must deserve it. It is so much fun when they deserve it. I could get real worked up over this and do a fine job. The pay doesn't matter. Glad to be your newest buddy, Gee

fuckin wow.....just as ive said b4.... ur unique talent of words never ceases to amaze me... ur mind is brilliant...like a rose....beautiful to sight....but a thorn well hidden and the power in ur heart ...yet as soft n kind as a monk.....brutal to those deserving i hope this guy pays for what hes done if its real... n i hope this girl realises how much of an amazing guy u r ....im honored just to kno u let alone call u my brother :) so ill end this with a "Fuck Yeh that was sick!" i await impatiently for the next one...u truely are a gifted artist with many talents

Much as I love your rant, don't use the word *dog* in vain! GDI! LOL! p.s. wtf was I when I missed the prelude to this rant?

Well! This is a doozy. Olya says she likes it. And I like that you use whatever language you want. Olya likes it because it has almost no redeeming qualities: no ear, the rhyme, the rhythm, the content. the bullying, the bravado, the medieval-like over the top chivelry. In some weird way, it has a heroic stance..., aka Don Quixote's tilting. It spreads testosterone around like hot mustard on a hotdog bun. At some level, it is entertainment. Brian

In this context, "no ear" means that this poem is like jazz to the unjazzified - a concoction of brass moving to and fro with the abandon of the imbibing writer. It is in keeping with the general thrust of the poem, so I would not change a thing. On the subject of chivalry, I will quote at some length form my very favourite author on the subject, Barbara Tuchman. From her book, A Distant Mirror: The Calamitous 14th Century, published in 1978, pages 62-69: "Of chivalry...much is known. More than a code of manners in war and love, chivalry was a moral system, governing the whole of noble life. That it was about four parts in five illusion made it no less governing for all that.... Since a knight's usual activities were as much at odds with Christian theory as a merchant's, a moral gloss was needed that would allow the Church to tolerate the warriors in good conscience and the warriors to pursue their own values in spiritual comfort.... ...courtly love was [chivalry's] dreamland. Courtly love was understood by its contemporaries to be love for its own sake, romantic love, true love, physical love, unassociated with property or family, and consequently focused on another man's wife, since only such an illicit liaison could have no other aim but love alone. (Love of the maiden was virtually ruled out since this would have raised dangerous problems, and besides, maidens of the noble estate usually jumped form childhood to marriage with hardly an interval for romance.)... The chivalric love affair moved from worship through declaration of passionate devotion, virtuous rejection by the lady, renewed wooing with oaths of eternal fealty, moans of approaching death from unsatisfied desire, heroic deeds of valor which won the lady's heart by prowess, consummation of the secret love, followed by endless adventures and subterfuges to a tragic demouement. The most widely known of all such romances and the last of its kind was the Chatelain de Coucy.... In the legend [the hero] falls madly in love with the Dame de Fayel and through an enormous series of maneuvers occupying 8,266 lines of verse is decoyed into the Third Crusade by the jealous husband, covers himself with glory, and when fatally wounded by a poisoned arrow, composes a last song and farewell letter to be dispatched after his death in a box with his embalmed heart and a lock of the lady's hair. Carried by a faithful servant, the box is intercepted by the husband, who has the heart cooked and served to his wife. On being informed what she has eaten, she swears that after such a noble food she well never eat again and dies, while the husband exiles himself in a lifelong pilgrimage to obtain pardon for his deed. ... Nothing fits this canon. The gay, the elevating, the ennobling pursuit is founded upon sin and invites the dishonor it is supposed to avert. Courtly love was a greater tangle of irreconcilables than usury. It remained artificial, a literary convention, a fantasy (like modern pornography) more for purposes of discussion than for every day practice. The realities were more normal..." Whereupon Ms. Tuchman describes the tendency of many knight's to say anything to get into a girls pants... er.... under their many folds of garments. Brian

I'll give ya 5 stars because I love it..I love when the a man stands up and sticks up for the woman he loves..is sassy, its bold and just down right sexy!! Thumbs up!! Jen

Any women would be proud to have you there to stand up for her.Respect. Great write. Lyz.x