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Mr Sheen

You make me so angry
my face gets all so mangy
you don't listen to me
best if I just talk to a tree

Need to get you out of my brain
the way you spoke to me again
you are nothing but a brick wall
I will forever stand tall

this time I'll blame the full moon
your nothing but a buffoon
you treat us all so mean
that's why we call you Mr Sheen

Three months is all I'll give you
then I will be out the door too
if not before you see
how incredibly idiotic you are to me

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Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Fleur

This is the second comment I have told someone? to punch the idiot ... but yeah do it ... I had a run in with a fucktard today and he just boiled my blood but its all good , I won :) Love you sweety you keep standing tall ;) Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
Fleur MacDonald

Fleur MacDonald

16 years 8 months ago

My darling,

your the best, love the new word "fucktard" I may need to quote you on that one, if I may. You need to start a new dictionary. I wanted to start a Drunk Bitch Dictionary, that would be cool hey. xxxx:)fleur hugs hugs and hugs
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Takes a bow LMAO ... I made that word up ...

I knew this bloke and he was a total ass anyway one day someone called him a fuckwit and I Yelled " HOW DARE YOU !! FUCKWIT ?? that would imply hes intellegent and well surfice to say I said ... " fucktard would be the more appropriate word and its stuck since ... he he I love making up my own words ... drunk bitch dictionary .... OoOOoOOooO nelly this is going to be fun when are we starting lmfao I get drunk and you write the words down ... god I want a drink !! god hates me but next week on my birthday I dont give a rats fat ass I am going to get well and truely shit faced and stick my finger up at the sky and say ner ner ner LOL love you I am sleep deprived soo excuse my insanity this morning !!!! (((hug))) Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Fleur

Good one. I love it when women speak their mind. You give us a voice. Looking forward to reading more. Lyz.
Fleur MacDonald

Fleur MacDonald

16 years 8 months ago

Thank you, thank you

Lyz, you are a treasure!!! I am so looking forward to telling him what I think on my last day, I don't care about burning my bridges! :)fleur
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Bosscombat

16 years 8 months ago

:)

Does your mr sheen look like john howard at all? I hope so I'd chuckle hard from my belly guts ♣ Pea ess. Great poem :) sorry again about the stars.
Fleur MacDonald

Fleur MacDonald

16 years 8 months ago

:)

why yes he does, but I think he might be shorter and balder, he's the worse boss I have ever had in my entire working life. Glad you like it! shame about the stars, guess I'll have to track you down and get them off you by brutal force via tickling! :)fleur
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 8 months ago

Write on! It’s funny

Write on! It's funny though how these fucktards (trademark that!) steal our energy... wasting even a poem. HOWEVER.....it's awesome to parley that energy into an awesome poem, eh? Tit for tat. Mr. Sheen, Mr Sheen... you have been outed. ~A
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Bosscombat

16 years 8 months ago

:)

here are those other stars i promised ♣