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A Poem Full of Carrots

A Poem Full of Carrots I have seen beautiful things, And I have left them alone too long inside my head. They have grown wild. The back of her knee has fallen in love With a lake swarming with light, And they grind slowly against each other in the dark. A Bolt of Lightning has buried its kiss in the neck Of Einstein's Handwriting. The Wingspan of Your Smile fights the White Keys silently and fiercely. [she wants to feel more, she wants to feel more of him.] The Color Red flushes under the hands Of Picasso's Blue Period. My Sister's Wrist exhales Against the shoulder of A Driving Rain. ~ If you think you see movement behind my eyes, It is only them, Rocking each other back and forth In their strange arms. If you think I write poems, It is only because Some gone, wild and beautiful thing Has fallen in love with the rim of my mouth Has stood at the edge, Spread its arms, And let itself fall.
— Diatom Shells, Aug 23, 2009

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 9 months ago

Long ago, I fell in love

Long ago, I fell in love with a man, actually I made a mistake, I fell in love with the poet in the man. To say I love your poetry goes beyond what love there is and who can find the carrot on the stick. ~A "In peace sons bury fathers, but war violates the order of nature, and fathers bury sons." ~ Herodotus
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Diatom Shells

16 years 9 months ago

yes..

you always seem to get me and my sickly love poems but I can't stop writing them and I thank you forever and always for being a fan and supporter of them and me. -diatom shells
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orgami

16 years 9 months ago

remember reading that people didnt uderstand what it was

sometimes i still write like this skipping and jumping words verbs nouns piling them like stones not sure what it is Im making a poem I know this is and I am entranced by your style as visual detailing like driving through the graffitti tunnels and reading peripherally the words that jump at a certian height only large and small scrawl meaning only meaning as it flows as I glide through comments like walking through a party catching fragrances worn to digress and impress the hunger of the want of more
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Diatom Shells

16 years 9 months ago

your

words are very intrigueing I can visualize this like moving water, lovely and seductive in a way. thank you forever and always origami. -diatom shells