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Beautiful, an awesome write but you know me- Line 11 I'd leave off [so much] line 15 I stumble on a bit. Once again, a very good poem! _________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

There is truly no words that can describe the feelings That overtake me when I read these words then And now to once again read them for these words You wrote before we ever laid in our Eternal bed..And now just as then tears fill my eyes and joy sings through my soul for my love for you...is unlike any emotion I have ever known. You might not realize how much I crave to read Your words on every page of our book stating that I am your Sweet Spirit, Your Pussycat, Your Queen, your poetess slave by choice. You might not understand how much I long to be controlled by these sweet and loving Words and even Your dark and mysterious words How they...How you...make my heart, my soul and body feel to You I belong You might not know how eager I wait for Your touch, your kiss, your love while I wait to live up to my determined fate to Lay..Live...And love in our Eternal Bed... Truly...one of the sweetest love stories I have ever read...Blessed we are by the Goddess to have found each other and to live within each other’s time and share the love we do It is uniquely rare indeed and I am eternally grateful for the opportunity to have found you in this life as well to share this love we have. The song of our lives so swiftly spent within the twilight of you my souls' lament is bound by notes of fabric rent by riddles and by rhymes. In the passing of dreams and bygone days of your sword and flames and my mystic's ways tho' all be lost, we two shall stay to become the legend of our time. ...the song is sung, and the tale is told of a love on fire that is written in gold Loving You...loving me Kisses

Eternal bed, flame, love, a beautiful love poem for the one you love. Just great. Thanks for sharing. Lyz XX

2 Quills This is simply exquisite you see into my heart and mind of my love and I in ages past of long ago did we meet and meet again and again to this time of now and maybe this time we will be together for this life time too. awesome Electric Blue Maybe you can look at a few of mine. Wine of Desire - You touched my soul - My love............