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greeneyes
greeneyes
Aug 23, 2009 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Simple Beauty

A web has been spun
Raindrops cling to the fine threads
Crystals in the sun
— greeneyes, Aug 23, 2009

About the Author

Country/Region: Colorado Springs Colorado

Favorite Poets: I love Dr. Suess! He is my favorite, I would love to write for children.

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Seren

Seren

16 years 11 months ago

This is you at your best

This is you at your best Elizabeth ... how beautiful is that last line .. crystals in the sun ... and I have seen those crystals, breathtaking ... Love Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 11 months ago

kudos

This is wonderful! Very aptly descriptive. Always, Cat
greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years 11 months ago

I am awed

Compliments from the two of you make me very happy,as you guys are my idols. Thank You Elizabeth
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bungalogic

16 years 11 months ago

can I just say...

green eyes, can I just say the other day I was photographing a spider in its web... it was so fascinating. Than I read this and thought of my spider. You have made such vivid imagery with just three lines. The words structure and haiku as a whole is wonderful. I enjoy your words. bungalogic creator of runopians
greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years 11 months ago

thankyou

Your comments are very important to me. Greeneyes

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