Simple Beauty

A web has been spun
Raindrops cling to the fine threads
Crystals in the sun

— greeneyes, Aug 23, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Country/Region: Colorado Springs Colorado

Favorite Poets: I love Dr. Suess! He is my favorite, I would love to write for children.

Critiques

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

This is you at your best

This is you at your best Elizabeth ... how beautiful is that last line .. crystals in the sun ... and I have seen those crystals, breathtaking ... Love Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...

Candlewitch

16 years 9 months ago

kudos

This is wonderful! Very aptly descriptive. Always, Cat

greeneyes

16 years 9 months ago

I am awed

Compliments from the two of you make me very happy,as you guys are my idols. Thank You Elizabeth

bungalogic

16 years 9 months ago

can I just say...

green eyes, can I just say the other day I was photographing a spider in its web... it was so fascinating. Than I read this and thought of my spider. You have made such vivid imagery with just three lines. The words structure and haiku as a whole is wonderful. I enjoy your words. bungalogic creator of runopians

greeneyes

16 years 9 months ago

thankyou

Your comments are very important to me. Greeneyes