Seren

Aug 22, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Serenade De Joie - A Witches Moon

Spectacular sphere
that glows my night,
bleed me to space,
I feel no fright

Smiling your face
looks down on me,
gazing to sky,
I'm smiling in glee

This madness hits
strikes me in love,
floats to celestial
on songs of the dove

A Serenade De joie
caste into dark light,
dimpled in sprinkles
stars blazing bright

A man on the moon
is in love with the sea,
and here I sit pining
in my love for thee

— Seren, Aug 22, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

Critiques

Geezer

16 years 9 months ago

Serenade of Joy

Moon madness must be catchy. This sounds so like what I wrote last night, that it could be a school exercise. What Ho, fair maiden? Have you been picking my brain? LOL. It has stars, a bird, and love. A taxi-driver friend of mine told me of a long distance love affair on the internet, and I wrote this for him. I will give it to him tomorrow night when I see him. L & Hugz, Gee

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Gee

Just read and commented on your latest, its really quite wonderful my friend ... I loved it ... I just wrote this one as a bit of fun for all of my friends that love the moooooon ... its a magical sphere is our moon lol ... inspires love songs , poems and moon madness ... makes ya think there is something to moon madness ... the moon controls our tides why not our inner tides ... Love and hugz Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...

Ravenshakti

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Seren...

This poem is a delight to read... I know you know it's lovely; but I wanted to tell you anyway. I can see your sparkles! Raven

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Raven

Hug first off, I never know if they are any good till you guys let me know ... Miss insecure me lol ... but I am always happy when you like them, I adore your mind and your poetry, your an inspiration in word my friend .. and I am glad the sparkles found you ... ;) Love Jayne "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...

mantiscepter

16 years 9 months ago

MOONSSSSSSSSSSSS...

Very nice to read: wonderful feelings left in the wake. sombre and wistful; liked it a lot. Mantiscepter

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Madnessssssssssssss LOL

Dear Mantis, there are many moon mad people here like me and Cat and I think I spied another mooon lover below you, sooooo I thought to bring the madness to a poem, glad you liked it my friend ... love and (hug) Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...

leonard daranjo

16 years 9 months ago

Nice piece Jayne

the last lines: A man on the moon is in love with the sea, and here I sit pining in my love for thee reminds me of the "Lady of Shalot" (not sure if I have the spelling right) Leonard PS: The Moon also happens to be my favourite sphere of light.

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Leonard

The lady of Shallot ? I am not sure of the spelling of it either and its ringing bells but noones home today lol ... My favourite time is when there is a spectacular moon in the sky the other night we had a full moon it was breathtaking, it seemed like it was right in front of me ... ok I am rambling a lot today lol sorryyyyyy ... glad you liked it hun much love and Hugz Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...

Fleur MacDonald

16 years 9 months ago

You can't polish

a turd but you can roll it in glitter!!!!

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Fleur ....

I cannot comment ... right now I am laughing so hard, they all think I've lost my mind ... Snake said thats sooooo true ... he he he love you hun Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...

greeneyes

16 years 9 months ago

wow wow wow

What can I say that I already haven't?You are a master at your craft! Love, Elizabeth

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Elizabeth,

I am the mistress of my craft , I am the work weary slave that aims to one day write words of meaning and art ... but till then I will work until I am satisifed lol ... I tend to be a perfectionist so this could take ... awhile lol ... thanks for your continued support I am honoured and humbled, that people enjoy reading my words .. love and hugz Jayne x x P.S will be reading again tonight so I hope you have something new ??? LOL will look "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Elizabeth,

I am the mistress of my craft , I am the work weary slave that aims to one day write words of meaning and art, for my master ... but till then I will work until I am satisifed lol ... I tend to be a perfectionist so this could take ... awhile lol ... thanks for your continued support I am honoured and humbled, that people enjoy reading my words .. love and hugz Jayne x x P.S will be reading again tonight so I hope you have something new ??? LOL will look "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...

Electric Blue

16 years 9 months ago

Serenade

Jayne On my on my Electric blue carpet ride to the moon as stars light our way The wondrous colours of the sphere's we pass on our journey unknown should we stop here for a while - no onward we go to meet the man in the moon - and smile I love moon madness. Often late evening or early hours i stare at the moon when walking home all alone no others around the air is clear the moon so bright it fills my heart with amazing delight just awesome my dear friend maggie xx

Electric Blue

16 years 9 months ago

Serenade

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Big Smile Magz !!

I get the biggest thrill when your whisked away by my scribbles, your light brightens and its magnificent to see ... hope your dreaming sweet dreams or not working to hard will talk soon lovely ... big hugs and love Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...

lyz

16 years 9 months ago

Excellent

Loved this.It is great. Thanks for the beautiful prose. Lyz.x

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Lyz ...

So glad you liked this one I wrote it for me and a friend we are both moon mad,thanks for the read I am so glad you like it, and I am glad you finally got here ... to neopoet I mean lol .. Love Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...

hugo la rosa

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Serene

Your words are perfect to reflect on the mirror feelings of the many poets that love your writing. I love the poem, thanks, Hugo

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Hugo

Thank you sooo much for your beautiful comment, I am humble that so many people like my thoughts... for a lot of them are thoughts and feelings ... I cant thank you enough.... Love and respect Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...

Candlewitch

16 years 9 months ago

Dearest Jayne

You know me so well... and know how much I love the moon in all its phases, but the full moon is my favorite. I love this piece as I can relate to it so well. Every line is perfect, I wouldn't change a word of it. It is playful and fanciful. As Elizabeth says, You are the Master... or is it Mistress of the Moon, LOL. Love, Cat

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Cat

I like to think that we are Be-witched by the moon LOL ... and I wrote this one for both of us ... and I knew you would like a bit of moon madness lol love you huni hope your feeling good talk to you soon hugz Jayne x x P.S I am no master not by a long shot I am happy to be mistress ;) lol love you x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...