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MY MISTRESS’ CORN
MY MISTRESS’ CORN
Last season, when the corn matured
We carried our baskets to the field
Feasting followed the huge harvest
My corn have done very well, so
We drew up a variety of recipes
To boil, cook and roast with charcoal
My mistress ate and savoured with smiles
This season, the corn are ripe again
In turn, she has the right over the field
The harvest was by far more than mine
She locked them up in a store and ate alone
And carried her face like she wanted to cry
Sometime it is good for this to happen
To know what lies in the heart of men
Next time I like her corn to mature first
So that when she eats without giving me
I will know what to do when it is my turn
For I too, will decide who eats what from which
Pass on the message for her to hear my views
I won’t be accused of playing a partial game
As she likes to be the judge and the jury
Make sure you have enough of the basics
Before you become everyday Santa Claus
Lest you give the last salt in the house
To the one who collects and collects from you
Then end up without any to cook your soup
For it has happened to me many times before
From those who took advantage of me
Critiques
Candlewitch
16 years 8 months ago
hello
t. reflexion
16 years 8 months ago
Thanks for the correction...