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This is my poem about gravity

This is my poem about gravity

What go’s up must come down
A magnetic equation a
Explanation  of  why carbon is bound         [Ok every thing here on earth that is living is a form of carbon]

This proven fact.
Can transcend , the logical
Protocol , of what go’s up must come to a end

Example ?
Each day, that we live
Sooner or later will come to a end .
But the next day , of tomorrow .
Is the old day , transcend
We loose site of the constant
Directions of change

Example ?
If your life is on track
Going your way ?
Your house paid
Your money saved
Time after time , I love you will your lover say
Your car is the latest model  made

HOW CAN GRAVITY TAKE THIS ALL AWAY
    



— press, Aug 22, 2009

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poewriter58

16 years 9 months ago

Press

Well done my friend. May I suggest dropping what you have in brackets, as it should be understood and needs no explanation) Just a suggestion , take it or leave it Chrys
press

press

16 years 9 months ago

auntie

auntie , auntie hey . glad to see U .I didn't know if all readers would know our chemical make up . I think it is so cool ? That they are going to make a diamond , out of Micheal Jackson strands of hair. How surreal is that ? every thing on earth is connected . LOV2U AUNTIE PRESS