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Mercies of Satisfaction
Blinding darkness
only seeing with the naked touch
that sends images to a fevered mind,
Fingers navigate every contour of a physical soul
pleasure heightens with each new discovery
of a erogenous zone,
Salty sweet sweat begins to pour
from the heat that rises on the surface of the skin
breaths of air escape in fevered pitches
as if a beast emerged from somewhere deep,
Eyes now see the beauty of the aura
as conscience is loss of the outside world
and senses flare into universal oneness,
Temperature rises
to the intensity of supernova
as two souls are lost beyond their known Chakra,
The weight of the world presses against them
as gravity takes its hold
not a single silent movement is seen,
In the stillness of the aftermath
when all that's heard is exhausted breathing
all that is known
are the Mercies of Satisfaction.
Critiques
Seren
16 years 9 months ago
OMG Eddie lol woah
Eduardo Cruz
16 years 9 months ago
Jayne,
Eduardo Cruz
16 years 9 months ago
Jayne,
hugo la rosa
16 years 9 months ago
Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
16 years 9 months ago
Hugo,