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greeneyes

Aug 21, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Lover's Spat

Here comes the lighting
Thor is angry with his bride
Soon her tears will fall

— greeneyes, Aug 21, 2009

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About the Author

Country/Region: Colorado Springs Colorado

Favorite Poets: I love Dr. Suess! He is my favorite, I would love to write for children.

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bungalogic

16 years 9 months ago

nice...

The haiku is on point. The message understood. well put together. thanks. bungalogic creator of runopians

16 years 9 months ago

thanks

Your comment means alot to me!

16 years 9 months ago

Ge

I applaud you in this write, short and sweet covering the meaning of it all in three lines. Great haiku! Thanks always, Eddie

16 years 9 months ago

wow

Thank you so much! I love to hear your comments,they are always welcome. Greeneyes

16 years 9 months ago

One of your best Elizabeth ...

I applaude anyone that can write haiku, in my mind its an art , your touched it all in those three lines well done ... Love Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...

16 years 9 months ago

Thank you

Wow, thank you so much!I really am tring to improve on all my stuff, one of my main troubles is thatv when I get an idea I get in to big of a hurry to write it down,one thing I need to do is be patient. Thanks alot, Elizabeth