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greeneyes

Aug 21, 2009 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Lover's Spat

Here comes the lighting
Thor is angry with his bride
Soon her tears will fall

— greeneyes, Aug 21, 2009

About the Author

Country/Region: Colorado Springs Colorado

Favorite Poets: I love Dr. Suess! He is my favorite, I would love to write for children.

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bungalogic

16 years 11 months ago

nice...

The haiku is on point. The message understood. well put together. thanks. bungalogic creator of runopians

16 years 11 months ago

thanks

Your comment means alot to me!

16 years 11 months ago

Ge

I applaud you in this write, short and sweet covering the meaning of it all in three lines. Great haiku! Thanks always, Eddie

16 years 11 months ago

wow

Thank you so much! I love to hear your comments,they are always welcome. Greeneyes

16 years 11 months ago

One of your best Elizabeth ...

I applaude anyone that can write haiku, in my mind its an art , your touched it all in those three lines well done ... Love Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...

16 years 11 months ago

Thank you

Wow, thank you so much!I really am tring to improve on all my stuff, one of my main troubles is thatv when I get an idea I get in to big of a hurry to write it down,one thing I need to do is be patient. Thanks alot, Elizabeth

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