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Gold and Pearls

 

 

I have given

the shimmering

moments of

my life

to shuffle

my best bet

with a handful of

singing universes.

These blinding

constellations,

where love dwells,

melodious as

they are

they have taken

flight from the

lower regions

of emptiness,

from the enchanted

results of ancient

battles who

sought the light

amidst the

peace of heaven.

 

Now, we have

finally learned

to speak to each

other's content

in the ears of

the wind,

which runs along

the river

near the end of

this house

of prayer.

We live here

in poetry,

searching for

those things

that have no

other choice but

be shaped into

a merry little

world like ours,

working its

way amidst the

gold and pearls.

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Fleur MacDonald

Fleur MacDonald

16 years 8 months ago

A beautiful

piece, really could feel your love of the word in this and you sound so calm, which is always nice to read. Don't stop :)fleur
hugo la rosa

hugo la rosa

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Fleur

It's good to see you again; thank you for your visit. Using sensitive words like yours is that we aspiring poets build poems like this one. Thank you for your comment once again. Hugo
hugo la rosa

hugo la rosa

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Cassie

I gather from your words indications that you have realized your own Self by reading mine, even though for a fleeting moment; it means a lot to me. Thank you, Hugo
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Hugo

Bravo my friend I am speachless at the beauty of YOUR words ... spotlight needs to light this one up ;) ... Love and hugz Jayne :) "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
hugo la rosa

hugo la rosa

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Seren

Thank you for your encouragement. You were right, you are an excellent judge of poems, and next time I'll stop and listen carefully to your comments. I'm grateful for your friendship, sincerity and affection. Respectfully, Hugo
Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 8 months ago

My Dear Hugo...

A deep smooth breath, and your words in this poem... And I merge into a lovely place with you. This is an exquisite Poem (Meditation?)... Thank you Hugo... Your friend... always, Raven
hugo la rosa

hugo la rosa

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Raven

I see the meditations you practice include selected words and phrases, and even passages. Young woman as you are, you are a great intuitive poet, but even a better friend, caring and fun to be read. Your comments are like poems too. Thank you for your pretty words and encouragement. Your friend, always, Hugo
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 8 months ago

hello Hugo

This piece is breathtaking! I especially love the lines: We live here in poetry, searching for those things that have no other choice but be shaped into a merry little world like ours, working its way amidst the gold and pearls. Always, Cat
hugo la rosa

hugo la rosa

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Cat

Thank you once again, your words are kind and filled with great regard for your fellow friends and poets. It's a pleasure to know that you liked this poem. You are an excellent friend. Hugo
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dearest Hugo

Wasn't that long ago this evening that I said ... this needs to be spotlit and here you are ... Congratulations my friend this poem is where it should be .. much love Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
hugo la rosa

hugo la rosa

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Seren

Thank you for making my words the main protagonist of your love an affection. Hugo
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 8 months ago

The essence of essence.

The essence of essence. Beautifully expressed. This is your best, Hugo. Thank you for your heart's true expression. ~A "In peace sons bury fathers, but war violates the order of nature, and fathers bury sons." ~ Herodotus
hugo la rosa

hugo la rosa

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Kailashana

I thank you from the bottom of my heart; you are always there when I need a boost to continue writing. Your friend, Hugo