Holes in my Shoes

You are so beautiful! You are indeed a poet, with words so devine. There is a certain quality, that many do not find. Your shoes are worn with walking, eyes ever on the prize. I can see you coming, cresting the next rise. Sit here, rest with me, tip the sand from your shoes. Not where you've been, But where you go, is really all the news. L & Hugz, Gee

Seek no further, for you are one who possesses a pure poet's heart. You've always had it my dear friend. I'm just so grateful that you deem to share the fruits of your poet's heart with us readers. The treasure I seek isn’t of gold, not of this world, and nothing you’ll hold This precious gift I seek to find, a poets heart that flows divine Seeking forever is this poets hand, I’ll walk to never, as my shoes fill with sand Love, Cat

Love the lines. The deepness of the thoughts... every line came out very well from your thoughtful mind to poetic words. Lovely write!

A flower that has bloomed with the eternal beauty of words, at last you have relaxed into the world of poetry that sought to hold you without a struggle of disbelief. Yet relax with care that you resolve each poem with care. A lovely write as is becoming usual, Yours Ian.T

Jayne WoW my friend I have been in this place a few times Out of control by forces unseen in body and mind you lay there your heart pumps so loud you feel the blood flow through like a raging river in full flow Your senses heightened so are smells from far away fresh cut grass on a summers day was I dreaming dreams so real its so hard to tell the difference come what may we try to fatham out but nothing makes sense as the more you think the less it makes sense Our one constant is our poetry our creation of dreams and memories all rolled into one ink in our veins runs on and runs true always for you walking to never is a place i know this i often do across deserts barren dune afer dune always searching never reaching the end my goal is just out of reach Just keep going one step at a time and maybe we will find rainbows end..... Dream on sweet dreams only are allowed so drift on clouds soft lay just dream on... blue

Jayne, Once again you are a magian with the pen(or keyboard!) love, Greeneyes aka Elizabeth!

Hi, I enjoyed your poem very much,like always, a poets words come from the heart and can make another think. Looking forward to reading more of your work.Jade is helping this first timer, so be patient with my comments. And once again, really enjoyed, Holes In My Shoes. Lyz, Jades mum.

Simply beautiful; Filled with pictures held in mind,felt within the rhythmic Heart: of Souls journey " Pain & Delight " flows throughout this writing; touching, the readers joy, and connecting both.... a privilege to read; thanks jayne xx Mantiscepter

enda, patrick collins. simply beautiful love the way it flows

...you DO have a poet's heart ! You've got a way with words and cadence that seems almost effortless. Thankyou for sharing your ability here. "Write on"! sincerely, @{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.

Seems to me you've already found it. I really enjoyed reading this, Jayne. You've got flow! Thanks for writing. Yours, Espen.

*Smiles* when i read the first and second stanza already my heart was filled with excitement because this poem talks of a woman who has found a sense of herself in this crazy world , the line "Boating the breeze blowing through caves,passing the bones of work weary slaves" reminded me of my mom, how strong she is and how she keeps giving even when se does not get anything in return.keep blowing us away with your divine words love Harriet

Indeed a wonderful poem,it flows so smoothly in this lyrical piece.Very inspiring.It is a magical read.The best I've read since back on the sight.Hope you are feeling better. All our best, Lacy, Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.

a splendid write. I really enjoy reading it. I have only one suggestion. Where you have (wont) it should be (won't) (sorry was thinking about Elizabeth at the time trying to put here name with her pen name) ~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara

Back again, just for the stars. Love Lyz.x. Forgot them, newbie mistake on first comment. sorry.

Only poets have hearts to lose If they are lost, how can life sustain? Serene is calm, with a volcano inside so strong in conviction, fighting injustice, Go on we are with you so that the heart is not lost.