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THE GATEKEEPER

THE GATEKEEPER

 

This massive, hooded figure was the keeper of the gate

In the darkness of his cowl gleamed two red eyes

I stood terrified before him, trying not to earn his hate

With a trembling hand I offered up my prize.
 

He took it in his scaley hand as if it were diseased

Then perused it in his lantern’s yellow light.

Smiled a sneering, snarling rictus, because he was displeased

Truly this was Satan’s creature of the night.
 

Another shadow fell across this portal to the Kings

My writ was handed to this demon’s spawn

The door was slightly opened so I managed to slip in

I was backstage, to see U2 play till dawn

— Tam the Chanter, Aug 21, 2009

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Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 9 months ago

Gatekeeper

And did U2 play my favorite song: "Bad?" Good poem, Ian! Has me smiling... Raven
Tam the Chanter

Tam the Chanter

16 years 9 months ago

gatekeeper

and I bet it didn't fool you for a minute ! Glad you liked it , I enjoyed the red herring aspect Love Ian