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Aug 21, 2009
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The Sun
Today I touched; soft white clouds
they sprayed my face; voices echoed loud.
beneath my visions, they soared to join ;
each one in darkness, blocked this void.
along trails that lead us, to speechless sights
I followed in the hours,late" by misty light.
beauty abounded, with turning; a course.
bringing to senses; a fulness; a force.
then conquered I stood. At the peak of it's reach.
staring down; through these clouds, eyes beseech.
bringing sights picturesque.not lost to time
for they filled with delight; these eyes this mind
A yell for old times sake, that roared" many miles.
with an ending to venture; that would make many smile...
they sprayed my face; voices echoed loud.
beneath my visions, they soared to join ;
each one in darkness, blocked this void.
along trails that lead us, to speechless sights
I followed in the hours,late" by misty light.
beauty abounded, with turning; a course.
bringing to senses; a fulness; a force.
then conquered I stood. At the peak of it's reach.
staring down; through these clouds, eyes beseech.
bringing sights picturesque.not lost to time
for they filled with delight; these eyes this mind
A yell for old times sake, that roared" many miles.
with an ending to venture; that would make many smile...
— mantiscepter, Aug 21, 2009
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mantiscepter
16 years 11 months ago
the sun
Seren
16 years 11 months ago
Mantis
mantiscepter
16 years 11 months ago
The Sun
Seren
16 years 11 months ago
Dear Mantis
mantiscepter
16 years 11 months ago
a sprinkling
lyz
16 years 10 months ago
Dear Mantiscepter
mantiscepter
16 years 10 months ago
Sunny
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