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Aug 21, 2009
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The Sun
Today I touched; soft white clouds
they sprayed my face; voices echoed loud.
beneath my visions, they soared to join ;
each one in darkness, blocked this void.
along trails that lead us, to speechless sights
I followed in the hours,late" by misty light.
beauty abounded, with turning; a course.
bringing to senses; a fulness; a force.
then conquered I stood. At the peak of it's reach.
staring down; through these clouds, eyes beseech.
bringing sights picturesque.not lost to time
for they filled with delight; these eyes this mind
A yell for old times sake, that roared" many miles.
with an ending to venture; that would make many smile...
they sprayed my face; voices echoed loud.
beneath my visions, they soared to join ;
each one in darkness, blocked this void.
along trails that lead us, to speechless sights
I followed in the hours,late" by misty light.
beauty abounded, with turning; a course.
bringing to senses; a fulness; a force.
then conquered I stood. At the peak of it's reach.
staring down; through these clouds, eyes beseech.
bringing sights picturesque.not lost to time
for they filled with delight; these eyes this mind
A yell for old times sake, that roared" many miles.
with an ending to venture; that would make many smile...
— mantiscepter, Aug 21, 2009
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mantiscepter
16 years 9 months ago
the sun
Seren
16 years 9 months ago
Mantis
mantiscepter
16 years 9 months ago
The Sun
Seren
16 years 9 months ago
Dear Mantis
mantiscepter
16 years 9 months ago
a sprinkling
lyz
16 years 9 months ago
Dear Mantiscepter
mantiscepter
16 years 9 months ago
Sunny