Morning watch

Bare, unguarded land

A vague snore, endearing mirth!

Sand in your lush eye

— doorman, Aug 20, 2009

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Critiques

Darby Cain

16 years 9 months ago

interesting…………..i

interesting..............i liked it

doorman

16 years 9 months ago

Darby Cain

Thanks for dropping by. Glad you liked these three short lines. Sincerely, Espen.

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Awaking to every brand new day , I always have sand in my eyes lol loved this short but throughly enjoyable write ... regards Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...

doorman

16 years 9 months ago

Jayne

Good to see you again, Jayne. Thanks for enjoying it. Awakening is a bit underrated, don't you think? All the best, Espen