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doorman
doorman
Aug 20, 2009 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Morning watch


Bare, unguarded land


A vague snore, endearing mirth!


Sand in your lush eye


— doorman, Aug 20, 2009

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doorman

doorman

16 years 11 months ago

Darby Cain

Thanks for dropping by. Glad you liked these three short lines. Sincerely, Espen.
Seren

Seren

16 years 11 months ago

Awaking to every brand new

Awaking to every brand new day , I always have sand in my eyes lol loved this short but throughly enjoyable write ... regards Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
doorman

doorman

16 years 11 months ago

Jayne

Good to see you again, Jayne. Thanks for enjoying it. Awakening is a bit underrated, don't you think? All the best, Espen

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