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A Midnight Dreary

When you can hear the light bulbs
as they blaze on through the night,

and as if on a "whim"
the stars all dim
but that brings not, the light;

with the planets all in order
but you fear they may fall down,
you're in the dark and eerie part of town.

~

The wind begins to come to life
dancing sporadically, everywhere;

and with every gust
it raises dust
it's only purpose is to scare;

and the patterns in the dirt
look like footprints from a crazy clown,
you're in the dark and eerie part of town.

~

Try and go about your business
and shake it free of you;

you'll get no rest
if it grabs your chest
Midnight Dreary knows what to do;

never has such an evil
caused such a deadly frown,
you're in the dark and eerie part of town.

~

You can try and hum, or whistle
to distract you in some way;

but this evil lives
and nothing gives
when it wants to come out and play;

the problem's you're the plaything
because there's no one else around,
you're in the dark and eerie part of town.


— docmaverick, Aug 20, 2009

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Antoinette Mar…

16 years 9 months ago

OOOOOh...I Really enjoyed this.....It's.....

reminisent of Edgar Allen Poe ....Good thing you didn't name it The Raven! LOL but really Doc...It was excellent..the flow...the description again..Awesome..
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 9 months ago

Thank you, Antoinette....

...for the sweet remark. I'm glad all over, because you enjoyed this one....and you're right. I, too am happy I didn't mention a raven, also ! "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.