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Aug 20, 2009
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i want to write a love poem (rewritten with Weirdelf's loving pen)
I want to write a love poem
I'm not carrying any banner,
just holding myself up--
poorer than I was,
more hungry for the world
you promised,
and now
instead of a love poem to you,
my dear Mr. President
of the boyish charms and smiling graces,
I'm afraid I'm here to remind you:
you've forgotten to whom
you spoke these words...
"YES, we can."
NOT to the politicians!
NOT to the generals!
NOT to the bureaucrats!
...but to the common folk who know
what it means to live the truth
at the bottom of the food chain,
you have forgotten how colour plays out
in the light,
you have forgotten that winds of change come with
the word "NO". "I will fight no more forever."
for sticks and stones, bullets and bombs maim and kill,
when there is no one who dares (or is left)
to speak the truth...
you have forgotten Viet Nam, Iraq, Palestine, and Antietam, Nagasaki
and you will burden your children's children with the
wages of war in Afhanistan,
you promised
being black
you promised
being rich
we still are
we still are
we still can't pay for pain or illness
we still can't move without buying
we still can't always eat
come home to us
even if our need is selfish
come home to us
Mr. President
can't you see the world is slipping
away, heart=sick, restless, tattered-trouserd?
Winter's coming and the blue=needle of death waits for
the next faltering step.
I'm not carrying any banner,
just holding myself up--
poorer than I was,
more hungry for the world
you promised,
and now
instead of a love poem to you,
my dear Mr. President
of the boyish charms and smiling graces,
I'm afraid I'm here to remind you:
you've forgotten to whom
you spoke these words...
"YES, we can."
NOT to the politicians!
NOT to the generals!
NOT to the bureaucrats!
...but to the common folk who know
what it means to live the truth
at the bottom of the food chain,
you have forgotten how colour plays out
in the light,
you have forgotten that winds of change come with
the word "NO". "I will fight no more forever."
for sticks and stones, bullets and bombs maim and kill,
when there is no one who dares (or is left)
to speak the truth...
you have forgotten Viet Nam, Iraq, Palestine, and Antietam, Nagasaki
and you will burden your children's children with the
wages of war in Afhanistan,
you promised
being black
you promised
being rich
we still are
we still are
we still can't pay for pain or illness
we still can't move without buying
we still can't always eat
come home to us
even if our need is selfish
come home to us
Mr. President
can't you see the world is slipping
away, heart=sick, restless, tattered-trouserd?
Winter's coming and the blue=needle of death waits for
the next faltering step.
— Kailashana, Aug 20, 2009
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Critiques
Diatom Shells
16 years 9 months ago
wow...
Candlewitch
16 years 9 months ago
Dear Anna
Janice Pearce
16 years 9 months ago
Anna
Kailashana
16 years 9 months ago
Thank you for your thoughts
Seren
16 years 9 months ago
Dear Anna ...
leonard daranjo
16 years 9 months ago
Brilliant write Ana and challenging too!!!
Darby Cain
16 years 9 months ago
great read
Marie-I-Be
16 years 9 months ago
Obama
Kailashana
16 years 9 months ago
When the hype was on for him