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greeneyes
greeneyes
Aug 19, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Tommorrow's Hope

Will there ever be a tomorrow
That I wont dread to see,
Will there ever be a daybreak
With promises for me,
Will there ever be a sunrise
That fills my heart with hope,
Will there ever be a dawn
That I know that I could cope?

"Of course there is my child"
"Let me dry your tears"
"For I am the King Most High,
And I will wash away your fears"
"All you  ever had to do,
is put your faith in Me"
"For trusting in your Lord and Savior,
Will always set you free.,"

"I had forgotten that you were there my God,
For that can you forgive?"
"I always do my child,
For as long as you will live,"
"You are all my beloved children
My love for you is great"
"You can always call on Me
It will never be to late."

I felt His love upon me
He lifted away my pain
No longer was I trapped by demons,
No longer I felt insane
Never again,will I stray from Him
For I have seen the light
There is no longer any challenge
That I am afraid to fight.

So if you ever feel your life is over
And there is no reason for you to live
Remember that He loves you so
He gave the greatest gift that He could give
His only Son died for us,
Died so we would not
This was the knowledge,I chose to in gore
The truth that I forgot

But He came to me at my darkest hour
And He lifted me to my feet
He brushed me off and said to me
"Through prayer there is no defeat"
"I am always here,
to guide you through this strife
And one day when it is all over,
you will have for everlasting life.













— greeneyes, Aug 19, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Country/Region: Colorado Springs Colorado

Favorite Poets: I love Dr. Suess! He is my favorite, I would love to write for children.

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Geezer

Geezer

16 years 9 months ago

Tomorrow's Hope.

I am not really religous, but like the theme anyway. I thought you were very good with your rhythm. There were a few spelling mistakes but you can fix them with a little tweak. I would change the sentence: Will there ever be a dawn that I know [ with ] I could cope. Respectfully, Geezer
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

16 years 9 months ago

Green eyes

Beautiful poem i especially like this part "Will there ever be a tomorrow That I wont dread to see, Will there ever be a daybreak With promises for me, Will there ever be a sunrise That fills my heart with hope, Will there ever be a dawn That I know that I could cope?" ~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara
Tam the Chanter

Tam the Chanter

16 years 9 months ago

talent

A beautiful piece of writing, green eyes,you just seem to improve every time. The sincerity and past hurts shine through, well done , girl, well done Kindest Regards Ian
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Green Eyes .. another Lovely write

And my favourite lines are the same as Barbaras they really are some splendid words .. Love and regards Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
DS

Diatom Shells

16 years 9 months ago

hey you

I remember when I was at the deep end and god reeled me back in it was such a low time in my life that I am thankful that I had god looking out for me. your poem reminded me of that but this makes us strengthen our character, and for that I am truly greatful. thank you green eyes! -diatom shells