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Subject: Winter 2


In 1969,
snow came at us
from every direction.
Wind whipped us
like heavy cream.
A relentless attack
with no end in sight.

contest code: 083109
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Subject: Winter
— Candlewitch, Aug 19, 2009

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Region, Country: Northwestern Wisconsin USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe, William Blake, Bob Dylan, Tom Petty, Carlos Castaneda, Jim Morrison, the whole of Neopoet and many more., Candlewitch

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Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

1969 was the year I was born lol

Must have been a bad omen I was born in your fall lol ... yikes ... made me feel trapped with you Cat ... awesome write you just get better and better my friend much love and hugz Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

16 years 9 months ago

Cat

beautiful poem i enjoyed it ~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 9 months ago

=)

Thank you Barbara. I'm glad you liked it. Always, Cat
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

16 years 9 months ago

~Cat~

My favorite lines: wind whipped us like heavy cream ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 9 months ago

=)

Thanks Janice, I like that line too! Always, Cat
L

lyz

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Cat

I still reckon you bring winter to its glory, no matter how relentless the attack. Excellent. Love Lyz XX