AN INADEQUATE EXCHANGE

This for me is your best so far :) ... the dam wall is going to break and it has and a part of me seeps from it still… Loved this one and these words are what give it its strength for me ... wonderful write ... Love Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...

I get bored ... what can I say .. And if you have any others like this one you have reservations about ... submit ... I find when I have doubts they usually are the ones that work ... don"t ask me why ??? it just is lol ... Love and hugz Jayne ... "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...

Almost a rant, but necessary sometimes. I personally know someone like this, my sister. She raised a brat that still lives with her at age 25. The brat won't help with any of the work, but has plenty of demands. But really it is my sister's fault, because she raised said brat to be this way. She spoiled her rotten. I like the end lines, but I also can really relate to these lines: when we give - without ever getting or even expecting anything in return resentment’s rot sets in I think the poem needs just a bit of polishing. not much, just a little. Always, Cat