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faerybeki
faerybeki
Aug 18, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

First Snow

Winter exhales
with each flake
fragility descends

Charting
a journey to Spring
— faerybeki, Aug 18, 2009

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sweetspirit

16 years 9 months ago

I miss Winter

Living where I do we don't get the four seasons and next to no winter at all so this was refreshing to me. Big Smiles, Jen
faerybeki

faerybeki

16 years 9 months ago

Hi Jen, glad you got some

Hi Jen, glad you got some refreshment here :) It's actually Summer here in the UK but the theme for August comp is Winter and I thought I'd have a go. We did actually have snow last winter, for the first time in ages! Much love Beki xx
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Beki ...

This is beautiful I loved the lines with each flake fragility descends Really lovely look at winter ... Love and hugz Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
faerybeki

faerybeki

16 years 9 months ago

Thanks Jayne, happy you

Thanks Jayne, happy you liked it :) Hope you're well lovely? Omi and I have got our dancing shoes back off the shoe rack ;) Love to you hon and hugs Beki xxx
KS

Kenneth Sharp

16 years 9 months ago

A flowery piece that nicely

A flowery piece that nicely encapsulates the transient beauty of snowfall.