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faerybeki
faerybeki
Aug 18, 2009 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

First Snow

Winter exhales
with each flake
fragility descends

Charting
a journey to Spring
— faerybeki, Aug 18, 2009

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Country/Region: GBR

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sweetspirit

16 years 11 months ago

I miss Winter

Living where I do we don't get the four seasons and next to no winter at all so this was refreshing to me. Big Smiles, Jen
faerybeki

faerybeki

16 years 11 months ago

Hi Jen, glad you got some

Hi Jen, glad you got some refreshment here :) It's actually Summer here in the UK but the theme for August comp is Winter and I thought I'd have a go. We did actually have snow last winter, for the first time in ages! Much love Beki xx
Seren

Seren

16 years 11 months ago

Dear Beki ...

This is beautiful I loved the lines with each flake fragility descends Really lovely look at winter ... Love and hugz Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
faerybeki

faerybeki

16 years 11 months ago

Thanks Jayne, happy you

Thanks Jayne, happy you liked it :) Hope you're well lovely? Omi and I have got our dancing shoes back off the shoe rack ;) Love to you hon and hugs Beki xxx
KS

Kenneth Sharp

16 years 11 months ago

A flowery piece that nicely

A flowery piece that nicely encapsulates the transient beauty of snowfall.

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