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Strivin' to be true
'specially ta yerself
the hard part is in knowin'
what to put onto th' "shelf";

doin' whatca wanna do
insteada doin' whatcha should,
thassa regular week inside th' hood.

Explainin' unto everyone
this thang thas called the "drag"
but really alls it seems ta mean, is...
don't get caught holdin' th' bag !

No matter what is happenin'
I want it understood,
one must obey the rules inside the hood.

I've been livin' down here
not really against ma will,
in my hearta hearts, I know whas right
it's the opposite, gives me ma fill;.

I lead by my example
and've done the best I could,
there's no life afta death when in th' hood.

be careful if yer trespassing
at night yer not sa large
the scandalous and the pit-bulls
now they're th' ones in charge !

So lock yer doors n' winders
and keep safe all thas good,
they're out n' about to getcha in th' hood.

Then suddenly.....th' dawn breakes
n' ya can count up all yer losses
the roads are marked with weary souls
n' sometimes, flowers n' crosses.

Jesus was a carpenter
and he died onna piece a wood
n' he's th'only thing that can change things inda hood.

There are childrin' without dads
mothers crying alla lone
n' if n' emergency happin's
thas no one witha phone,

but things can't last forever
whether or not they're bad or good;
let's celebrate the message of th' hood.

Life is butta mind set
the place doesn' make things, hard...
but there is such a thing
as having too much, in yer yard;

so please don' start talkin' ta us
'boutta place ya never stood...
there's a lotta stuff, goin' down inside th' hood.
— docmaverick, Aug 18, 2009

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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press

press

16 years 9 months ago

Doc

This caught my eye , because I live in the hood, and my grammar needs help.I see the play on words [ the slang of the hood] per say. I mean no disrespect. But U should have really let them have it. All the ones that are doing what they want , and not what they should . U should have included in this poem ? [DO U SPELL afta LIKE THIS OR LIKE THIS AFTER]. This poem has a lot of meaning for me. And maybe it's just a play on words for U. I am just saying U could made a lot of people , take a deeper look at their hood U should read TRIGGER A MAN VIEW BY ME. LOV2U PRESS
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 9 months ago

Hear me know press....

...I was born tn Trenton, Michigan...lived in the ghettoes of Pomona, Ca.-(Have youever heard of , "Tre fi seven"?...and am white. Figure it out. I now live in the "hood" in, Victorville...predominately Hispanic, AND black-So, my good friend....you're preaching to the choir. Thankyou, for the comment. "write on"! sincerely, #{:>{)}8==== docmaverick.
press

press

16 years 9 months ago

Hey Doc

Ok lets laugh for a minute [ First of all I don't mess with the advocates with comments of judgment secondly I would never mess with a founder] .Because U guys have earned the right . I have been in business for most of my life. So one boss to another boss , I have mad respect for the years U have worked for that title Founder. So Doc I don't see U as from the hood or “Tre fi seven”?…and am white. Figure it out. Maybe I am not smart enough to figure out that riddle [smile] only as a master poet [per say] . But Doc I read your poetry all the time. Who is better for me to learn from than a FOUNDER. So in my comment ,I only just agreed with what U said . Now I will mess with Jess weird ? Only because he likes to push the envelope. PEACE OUT DOC
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 9 months ago

My bad....

...for over re-acting, I inflected something into it that you didn't really say, so I apologize to you. Now, as for the elf.....let's "double-team" him ! Okay ?L.o.l.! Seriously, I beg pardon of you, and I'm honored that you read any of my postings ! I think perhaps, I've overlooked some of your previous comments...or, I've rendered you "unremarkable".L.o.l. Either way, that's quite a large, dry, sour pill that a writer would have to swallow after having done such a thing to a prospective reader !Again, I'm sorry! Thanks again, for taking the time to comment. "Write on"! sincerely, 8==== docmaverick.
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Antoinette Mar…

16 years 9 months ago

Hey Doc....

I wasn't going to comment on this write...but the comment made by Press caught my eye....he nailed it...I like both your write....and I enjoyed the comment...thank you once again...you are so versatile...
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 9 months ago

Thanks....

...Antoinette, I ALWAYS appreciate hearing what you have to say. "Write on"! sincerely, 8==== docmaverick.