Janice Pearce

Aug 17, 2009 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Skater's Dance

We danced among the snowflakes,
in the cold of night
cut deep into the
the ice and twirled,
on the winter's edge of doubt.

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Subject: Winter

— Janice Pearce, Aug 17, 2009

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Country/Region: USA

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sweetspirit

16 years 11 months ago

I like the title to your

I like the title to your poem and the theme is most definately wintery. I enjoyed it greatly. SweetSpirit

Janice Pearce

16 years 11 months ago

Hello SweetSpirit, Thanks for reading and the feedback, always appreciated! ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

Candlewitch

16 years 11 months ago

Janice

a pretty piece of winter portrayed here. Always, Cat

Janice Pearce

16 years 11 months ago

Skater's Dance

Always appreciate your visits, and comments Cat! _____________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

prayersbyPatty

16 years 10 months ago

Jan

I like this one, of course, I like your style, always positive......

Janice Pearce

16 years 10 months ago

Skater's Dance

Thank you Patty- Long time since I've heard from you hope all is well with you! ___________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

hugo la rosa

16 years 10 months ago

No doubt

here that this is in the borderline of of the great and the magnificent. I like your poem, quite artistic and sad at the same time. Best Regards, Hugo

Janice Pearce

16 years 10 months ago

Skater's Dance

Hugo, I'm glad that you enjoyed this, thanks for commenting. Always appreciate your feedback! ___________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

lyz

16 years 10 months ago

Skaters Dance

Lovely,actually reminded me of my mum, watching an old Sonja Henni,I think that's how you spell her name, movie. She said the skating made her feel good, and she just loved to watch her dance.Very nice. Lyz.

Janice Pearce

16 years 10 months ago

Skater's Dance

Hey Lyz, thanks for your feedback. Glad that it brought back memories~ __________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

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