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The Odyssey of a Lotus by Jamie Turney
The Odyssey of a Lotus
By Jamie Turney
The Lotus sought to rise above its unstable beginning to experience life for itself
Setting its sights on things unseen to alter its blindness viewed only in myth
Rescuing itself from certain ruin in hopes of joining things that were living, not just alive
Still afraid of choosing its path
For only one path will bring its freedom
All others will end in the unearthing of its relentless roots
Giving up was not an option for something born from the depths of mud
It pushed its way out of the seed seeking to reach the warmth of the sun
Ding-dong rang the bells of truth off the shores of tomorrow ushering in the new day
The Lotus had learned to care for itself which insured its survival in a world that refused to know its worth
For the hand of Forgiveness held it once gently and greeted its beauty with all the innocence of a child
A Forgiveness which knew that finding the light had been the Lotus' greatest achievement
And its most difficult journey
Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 9 months ago
Welcome, Jamie, enjoyed your
jamadarie
16 years 8 months ago
Just a differerent version of my poem.