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The Righteous Flames

Winds that whisper
Cold and crisply
Rustling the leaves
That chills the bones.
Memories so dark and cold
So very old
Seeps from beneath the dead soil
Desperate to be told.

In a circle round
torches
Shear lighting night
Blaze bright
Grim faces
Unforgiving
and Unyielding
Carved in merciless delight

Here beneath
A blackened and gnarled tree
Within the center
Was a fair young woman
Named with blessings, Avonia
A child of the mother earth
Of our sisterhood
Loving all things Natural
As any Wiccan should.

Crimes against none
In pale light of the moon
For visions she drew
And ancient ruins she threw
Convicted
Judged
Dragged from her simple home
To die the most unnatural
In horrible pain and all alone.

In this quiet place
This killing ground
Where the remains of her ancestors
Could also be found
The silent dead
Her kith and her kin.
Damned guilty of what
Others claimed as witchery and sin.

Teetering unsteady
Upon an old rickety wooden chair
The cool night winds whispering
Through her long crimson hair.

Rope pulled taut
About her fragile neck
Cruelly tightened
Her frail hands bound
Crossed behind her.
Delicate skin once
Creamy and flush
Now  pale and haunted white.

Witch!! They yelled
As they spat at her
You Whore of desire
She beds the beast with two backs
Whore she be!
Witch she is!
Let us hang her now from this tree!

I’m innocent she pleaded
With her tears and ire
Less than nothing the devil was in
Her young hearts beating fire.
Justice this is not
Listen was all she ever did
To her Sweet Goddess’ call.

All of them every last one there
Harbored lust and desires for
This poor girl with the crimson hair.
That being her only crime
Her only misdeed was
Reviling them all
Not indulging their lustful needs

That was the way it was back in those days
Church not with love held an unbridled sway.
Begging  she pleaded calling out each mans name
Nothing wicked she had done
To blame she was not!

None gathered there
Would hear or listen
None there gathered
Dared to even come near
Avoiding her emerald eyes
Let these flames dry her tears

Misery and woe was this
Poor girls tale.
Accused and defamed by this
Mob and cast down below

Tears shed
Weeping enough
That new rivers would flow
Yet the council would hear none of it,
In a league with Satan
They kept telling her so
Beguiled we will not by your witch’s call!

Burn her
Hang her
Watch her die!
God will suffer no more
Of your  foul wretched lies!

The stool went the Preacher
With dark intent
He strode for poor Avonia
This poor poor girl
The darkest of ills
This would be.

Slapping her
Heavy handedly marring
The softest flesh of her face
Over and over he would strike
Showing no mercy or grace
No kindness or reprieve
This ugly mark of his hand
Was all he would leave

Peering upwards with
His Bible held high
He parted his  mouth
Shouting ever so loudly
A heated Christian cry
The will of our Lord, God
Unclean thing DIE you must!!!

As he kicked at her swiftly
Full of hate and malice
Down to Hell
He convinced he sent her
Damned to dance is Satan’s dark palace.

Kicking and struggling
She twisted and swung
Her frail little neck
Stretched by that rope
The deed was done
There she hung.

If this weren’t enough for
These blood thirsty men
More cruelties they wished to do
Determined they was to kill
This poor girl true.

The torch they set light
The hem of her plain cotton dress.
Brightly burning the fire took searing
Poor Avonia's flesh

Louder and higher the flames did crackle
And roared !
Until these men knew
Part of this earth that
Wicca Avonia
Wasn’t anymore

We have struck
See it here be done
God be our savior
Our Sheppard
Satan’s work s
Every one of them
Be undone.

This was the night
That winds whispered
Cries within the trees
This nightmarish truth
Toforever  be told when down
Falls the leaves
From ashes to dust
Avonia'sgrave is long since grown cold
The fright never leaves us no matter how old we grow

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Diatom Shells

16 years 8 months ago

what a....

a wonderful tale. let you who have not sinned cast the first stone. sorry I had to. but I like your twists in this it has a cold ending but brilliant is this story. I have heard of women being called out as a witch just because of their attractive nature and yet they were killed by priests and so called holy things of that nature. but I like your take on it nice write. -diatom shells
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sweetspirit

16 years 8 months ago

Diatom

I am so glad you enjoyed this...I posted this the other day and hadn't had any reads yet was wondering if it was too long or just plain sucked *lol* but so happy you enjoyed it.
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2 Quills

16 years 8 months ago

Somebody cookin some bbq over here? Doh!!!

Well it most certainly doesn’t suck darling! I thought that it was an epic tale that was rather gripping in nature. It’s quite reminiscent of the days during the great inquisitions when righteous burnings occurred. It was quite vivid and it gave me chills. Now that you made the spelling corrections, I do not see anything negative worth pointing out. I loved this and its creator. Me
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sweetspirit

16 years 8 months ago

Smiles

Well one can only wonder :))))) Glad you love it and me!! Smooches ya, Moi
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Jen,

I dont know why but I couldnt see this on your profile yesterday , was bizarre lol , yay I finally made it , ok in my opinion this could be sharpened its a really good story ... In a circle round torches Shear lighting night Blaze bright Grim faces Unforgiving and Unyielding Carved in merciless delight Thats just an idea, and this one does show the beginnings of a great story , and I just wanted to show you what I meen, I really wanna give this one a high five , and I will be back , thats just my opinion huni , and pppssst I am not always right lol ... (hug) love Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
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sweetspirit

16 years 8 months ago

Seren

Thanks for the input..I do agree..I have made the changes and agree with ya.
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Awww jen that reads so much better

its smoother , when you write it read it out loud and when you get a catch or a pause you don't want? there is your problem usually LOL but it was a piece of advice given to me when I first started here, and it stood me in good stead since ... Probably one of the best bits of advice , write your own poems in your own words , for then it is your art,and pick what corrections you make, not everyones vision is the same as yours , don't ever feel that if I suggest something its right, for I am not always right (I say that all the time)and I am often wrong, ask my hubby lol ... Love Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Jen I meant to give you your

Jen I meant to give you your stars the last time I commented , five for a gutsey effort your working hard and it shows ... much love and hugz Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Jen

Very compelling, I felt for Avonia. My cousin in-law has been a practicing Wiccan for the last 6 or so years, very secretive about it too, but I am glad times have changed, to a certain degree anyway. If this was read to an audience, their would be silence in the house.Beautiful. Lyz.
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sweetspirit

16 years 8 months ago

Lyz

Aww..thank you so much for reading and commenting. I am blessed with my heritage it is something I was born with and I am very proud of. So for me this has been lifes long journey constantly growing and learning until hopefully finding my rightful place and acheiving what it is I am meant to do. Jen
DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 8 months ago

Hi Sweetspirit, I thought it

Hi Sweetspirit, I thought it was charming. I did have a problem switching back and forth from ryhme to freeform, but the story was good for sure. A little long, it could come across a little clearer. A little tweaking in your breaks could help. I could make a few suggestions, but my problems is whether or where to ryhme or not, I didn't see a set form. So I won't. It was a good read. I look forward to reading more. D.D.
themoonman

themoonman

16 years 8 months ago

Hi Jen...

I personally didn't have a problem with the changing scheme, in fact it was a compelling write for me... I did think it may be a bit long but can see that you had a grander tale to tell which sometimes demands more from the writer to get it out... she beds the beast with two backs... ooooooo such a wicked accusation... The history of man is an ugly one in many ways, this is one of them, thank you for sharing it with us here. Richard