Feel My Fingers

Meteoric silver streaks
A licorice-black sky
Orange flavored moon
Rests on the horizon

Syrup voices riding electrons
Charged with emotion
Making music to my eyes
The lone wolf howls....

Magnetic personalities
Pulling my mind....
The attraction is strong
Fingers pushing words

Tap tapping keys
Communion sends pleasure
I await a reply....
Alone nights are long

— Geezer, Aug 15, 2009

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Region, Country: New York State - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Poe, Emily Dickenson, Robert Frost, Shakespeare, and many of the poets here at Neopoet.

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Critiques

odiumscurse

16 years 9 months ago

Nice style

Your meanings are twisted art on fields of poetry, exact, deep and different creative styles such as this one, pace,rythm and titel, good! PHENOM:T.S

Geezer

16 years 9 months ago

Nice Style

Twisted Art! Wow! That is one of the nicest comments I have ever gotten! Thank You! That is what I strive for, different styles, and means to make you feel. TY ~ Gee.

Diatom Shells

16 years 9 months ago

I like this one! nice visuals and your title is awesome your poem reminds me of a technological advance nicely done and witty. my favorite words here are, "Meteoric silver streaks A licorice-black sky Orange flavored moon Rests on the horizon" -diatom shells

Geezer

16 years 9 months ago

Ohhh,

I had just finished reading a Sci-Fi anthology, and there was a couple of stories with high-tech communications in them. There were also some good descriptions of deep-space, and worlds the protaganists saw. Thank you for commenting, and I am going to read more of your stuff, so I get an idea of what appeals to you. I like to know what my readers like. Thanks much, Geezer

greeneyes

16 years 9 months ago

Good going

Wow Geezer! This was good!Your writing is wonderful!If this was the first poem in a book i was considering buying, this poem who make the sell!Great job! Love Always, Greeneyes

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

You need to drive that Taxi more often

Dear Gee This is one of your best, again your striding out a little further into the unknown and see what you brought back for us? ... Wonderful write my friend ... My Love & hugz Jayne x x And these words were my favourite you really have something with this one hun !! Magnetic personalities Pulling my mind…. The attraction is strong Fingers pushing words Pulling and pushing so beautifully together this stanza is awesome .... "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...

Geezer

16 years 9 months ago

I need....

I somehow had the thought of the pulling and pushing, as if each were the cause of the other. Thank you Lady Seren, for the profuse comments. I lap them up as if a hungry cat finding a sweet bowl of milk on the porch. My strides get longer each time I visit my home in Neopoetland. I cannot deny that I get so many ideas from here and all my fellow poets. All my friends. L&Hugz, my friend.~ Gee

Race_9togo

16 years 9 months ago

Hey Gee

LOL....I can relate man, I really can...don't you hate an empty house? Its a great description of what you do, what I'm doing now, and what the rest of us are doing too! LOL Great imagery, and I love the expectancy of coming replies at the end, that's real good. Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race

Geezer

16 years 9 months ago

Empty House?

Don't I wish! But you do have the essence of what this is about. I feel alone a lot, in my own house. I shut myself in my room, and try to pretend that I am alone! There is no contradiction here. I will have to write some more horror tonight, I have some mad to get rid of. Geezer