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Aug 15, 2009
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The Last Rose Of Summer
I saw it late one autumn eve
bending with the wind
a rose that shined with beauty
so full it's petals finned
I studied it in silence
moving closer as I stared
wondering of its presence
in the brisk October air
never had I seen this
a rose so late in bloom
standing with such brilliance
parting clouds above that loomed
I came within an arms reach
then stopped to take a breath
my mind was warm sensations
it's thoughts were to caress
so velvet it's formation
a perfect moulded vine
that seemed could stand forever
as a dream could in one's mind
clouds had brushed tree-tops
moving south in swirling mass
with dawn the sun came breaking
spreading rays that seem to cast
this quiet single moment
to watch this rose retire
as this evening was a venture
an almost filled desire
The Last Rose Of Summer
I saw it late last night
it danced in winds beauty reigned
as a diamond burning bright
bending with the wind
a rose that shined with beauty
so full it's petals finned
I studied it in silence
moving closer as I stared
wondering of its presence
in the brisk October air
never had I seen this
a rose so late in bloom
standing with such brilliance
parting clouds above that loomed
I came within an arms reach
then stopped to take a breath
my mind was warm sensations
it's thoughts were to caress
so velvet it's formation
a perfect moulded vine
that seemed could stand forever
as a dream could in one's mind
clouds had brushed tree-tops
moving south in swirling mass
with dawn the sun came breaking
spreading rays that seem to cast
this quiet single moment
to watch this rose retire
as this evening was a venture
an almost filled desire
The Last Rose Of Summer
I saw it late last night
it danced in winds beauty reigned
as a diamond burning bright
— mantiscepter, Aug 15, 2009
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mantiscepter
16 years 9 months ago
roses
Seren
16 years 9 months ago
Mantisscepter
mantiscepter
16 years 9 months ago
beauty:
mantiscepter
16 years 9 months ago
A rose
greeneyes
16 years 9 months ago
beautiful
mantiscepter
16 years 9 months ago
Roses