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2 Quills
Aug 15, 2009 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

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— 2 Quills, Aug 15, 2009

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sweetspirit

16 years 11 months ago

Outrageous!!!

I must say I love your humorous side but darlin oh dear this piece is truly the funniest.. I just can't stop giggling.. Luvs you 2 many... Me..the one who smells like candy *winks*
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2 Quills

16 years 11 months ago

My Sweet

I just simply love to see ya smile! Smooch
Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 11 months ago

Candy...

I say... keep your wife's toes happy... (and your wife) and keep on feeling randy... It's what makes the world dance! This poem is a delight Corey... My best to you... Raven
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2 Quills

16 years 11 months ago

And I say...

...I shall both my dear friend! A little dance, a little romance, does it get much better than that? Shine on Raven! Thank You!
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Marie-I-Be

16 years 11 months ago

Fun and sweet ...

... except maybe for the sushi part! Corey, instead of "my wife and I's" in the second one, how about "my wife's and my"? I wish I smelled like candy. Jen, how do you do it? A little dab behind each ear? Slather it on all over? Probably for you it just comes naturally!
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2 Quills

16 years 11 months ago

Darnit, Marie!

I was hoping to sneak that one by but, oh noooo! You had to find it didn't you? Ok, ok, you got me! But I'm only changing it cause your right. Better watch out or I'm going to start sending you all of my stuff to edit, muhahahaha! Just kidding Marie, I wouldn't wish that on my worst enemy! :) Thanks for dropping in, I apreciate your input!
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lyz

16 years 10 months ago

Dear 2 Quills

Funny, Ha Ha, Lol, Hilarius. Yes I did Like it. Well done and very witty. Lyz xx

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